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Life Around God

Around Him my life revolves midst freedom cheer secured with love as His child so dear braced by guiding wisdom rod granted favour’s nod indeed blest… God* bestows best while heart He does prod to tread path of servant sod bringing me toward His bosom near… Around Him my life revolves midst freedom cheer.
*1John 5:11 And this is the record, that God hath given to us eternal life, and this life is in his Son. July 15, 2020 2nd place, "Andaree - 11 Lines" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May; judged on 7/18/2020.

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Date: 7/27/2020 3:29:00 AM
Life around God is a blessing and a grace to be rejoiced. Glad to read it from your pen Beata. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this spiritual rendering , Beata.
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Date: 7/19/2020 12:43:00 PM
A lovely spiritual connection with the divine in this Andaree Beata. Congratulations on your wonderful second place win with this inspiring poem my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/19/2020 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations for your lovely spiritual lines, Beata.
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Date: 7/19/2020 6:50:00 AM
Congrats!! my friend on your win...great entry Beata...love & hugs..^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/18/2020 12:41:00 PM
Beautiful spiritual write Beata, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/15/2020 9:08:00 AM
Really sweet love you write for our Father in Heaven... Well done
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