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Life Worthwhile

Life Miracle of birth enshrines an ethereal event Whether in poverty or affluent wealth. While some are blessed with enviable health, Some get saddened by persistent illness. Life distressed by destitute and hunger Submersed under depths of gruesome sorrow, Eminently thrives to awaken from slumber To reach a dawn of brighter tomorrow. Every action of goodwill inspires someone To equal reaction of similar intentions, Every joy of receiving swiftly reciprocates Into act of giving that admirably reverberates. Abundance of wealth often returns to charity, Hope inevitably rises from ashes of poverty, Happiness visits but never stays forever, Every winner someday faces a losing endeavor. Stepping outside onto avenues of strife Life is overwhelmed by grief that magnifies, As meager existence of restless feelings Questions the virtues of opulent dwellings. Money and power may satisfy for a while But upon introspection they don't suffice. Life worthwhile thrives with family and friends For material things don't matter in the end. December 2, 2017 Placed 2nd: Strand select X contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 4/2/2022 9:02:00 AM
"Money and power may satisfy for a while. But upon introspection they don't suffice. Life worthwhile thrives with family and friends. For material things don't matter in the end."..... With what sublime thoughts you have summed up your poem after enumerating the shifting sides of joy and sorrow. Power or pelf cannot satisfy us, but we need much more than that ! As ever lofty thoughts in a beautifully composed poem..... dear Vijay !
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Date: 12/3/2017 9:31:00 PM
So true, Vijay, you can not take them with you :(
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/4/2017 6:27:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 12/3/2017 8:26:00 PM
Nice, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/4/2017 6:27:00 AM
Thank you James!
Date: 12/3/2017 4:46:00 PM
So very true, Vijay, it's not about material possessions and I love how you tied this up on that note.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2017 7:18:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 12/3/2017 7:46:00 AM
Much truth here. Beautifully mastered words. In the end, we all have the same square foot dwelling, (about 28), holding a single rose as our only possession. Great write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2017 9:47:00 AM
Thank you Rhoda--appreciate your comments!
Date: 12/3/2017 2:02:00 AM
Excellent. Well expressed and well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2017 6:11:00 AM
Appreciate your comments--thank you Ravi!
Date: 12/2/2017 6:43:00 PM
Oh Vijay this is such a beautiful and wisdom filled poem. the entire world needs to read this it's message transcends all barriers all stations and reminds us of what is truly important. Well done my talented soup friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2017 6:10:00 AM
Many thanks friend--appreciate your comments!
Date: 12/2/2017 3:04:00 PM
Words of wisdom Vijay...Well expressed...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2017 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 12/2/2017 12:20:00 PM
Superb writing my friend...loved it, Vijay...god bless...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2017 2:45:00 PM
Appreciate your comments..thank you WW.
Date: 12/2/2017 8:19:00 AM
This is a lesson that I have learned first hand, Vijay. I wish I had learned it sooner ! Great poem
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2017 10:45:00 AM
Thanks you Mike--appreciate your visit.
Date: 12/2/2017 8:16:00 AM
So true Vijay. Very well written :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 12/2/2017 7:36:00 AM
I won't trade God's blessing upon me for silver or gold...but it would feel better if I had some before I get old...Positive poem Vijay...All the best my friend
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Arturo!
Date: 12/2/2017 7:23:00 AM
- A beautiful and true poem, Vijay :) - Best wishes for a marvelous weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise!

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