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A mighty river life is, Where The powerful waters of Rushing feelings, Roaring emotions And Thunderous ideas flow, That In wonder its source has And Its estuary in awe! © Demetrios Trifiatis 31 MARCH 2014

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Date: 4/2/2014 1:48:00 PM
Powerful adjectives Demi...where the flow pulls us along to the end of life...our estuary. highly rated. // paul
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Date: 4/2/2014 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Paul for your heartfelt visit and comment!
Date: 4/2/2014 7:07:00 AM
Life is indeed a combo of so many powerful things. Enjoyed your poem
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Date: 4/2/2014 9:59:00 AM
Thank you John for your visit! BTW welcome to our poetic family!
Date: 3/31/2014 10:34:00 PM
A new frontier we have to conquer, the ever- changing landscape, the material we need to sustain, the endless beauty, the special gaze of a stranger - I am kidding about the last part. Very good one, Demetrios. Sweet dream :)
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Date: 4/1/2014 1:04:00 PM
Hello Toquyen and thank you for your kind visit and comment!
Date: 3/31/2014 1:29:00 PM
a wonderful life breathes through your graceful work, D... beautifully done!..huggs
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Date: 4/1/2014 1:06:00 PM
Your visit dear nette constantly brings a broad smile on my lips, thank you for that!
Date: 3/31/2014 12:40:00 PM
Yes; it is so true. That sure is life. Thanks for sharing ... Lucy
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Date: 4/1/2014 1:08:00 PM
Lucilla, yes, it is true and you know that for you have been through many trials in your life. Thank you my friend for your cordial visit and comment!
Date: 3/31/2014 12:24:00 PM
- ........... "in awe" ............... Amen - ! - Beautiful poem Demetrios ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2014 1:09:00 PM
So sweet of you to visit and comment dear Anne-Lise, thank you!
Date: 3/31/2014 7:20:00 AM
Great imagery dearest friend, a powerful and true depiction of life - loved your usage of potent adjectives in such a short narrative. Alofas, Tiaua.
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Date: 4/1/2014 1:11:00 PM
Tiaua my friend, it is so kind of you to visit and comment in such a polite way! Thank you!
Date: 3/31/2014 6:04:00 AM
I am always in wonder of the river of life my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning! This is a wonderful write here Demetrios! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/1/2014 1:16:00 PM
My eternal and kind friend Russell, thank you so much, once again for visiting and commenting with such warmth!
Date: 3/31/2014 2:43:00 AM
Beautiful Demetrios... Verlena
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Date: 3/31/2014 4:45:00 AM
So sweet of you dear Verlena!

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