Life

If only life was the way we want it to be… It is not what life makes of us… but what we make of life… But there comes a time where it all seems so pointless… Times where you just don’t know what to do anymore… Everything at that point and time is just too much to bear. Walking your head down… feeling like can I face this world…? You feel like you've taken more than you can handle… Then all so suddenly there is this feeling in your heart… in your soul… Telling you it’s all just a passing phase… this is the time your faith is tested. Feeling all has let you down… GOD comes along and lifts your head up… Telling you, I am your FATHER and you are my Child… Therefore you have no reason to keep your head down… Now you keeping your head up but holding on to your problems… In life we sometimes have to fail in order to succeed… But with GOD why settle for failure…? Hand it over!!! Your FATHER loves you and HE is always willing to assist… He knows your troubles before it takes place. He is just waiting for you to call on HIM… Don’t Delay!!! Time waits for no MAN!!! The safest place is on your knees and in Gods Heart… That’s where you’ll stay Always!!!! GOD BLESS

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Skat A

Date: 1/19/2016 8:06:00 PM

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Skat A

Date: 6/14/2013 10:53:00 PM

You picked a pretty good first poem to post, Carosine. Stopping by with a sweet smile and a warm Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless.......... Hugs* "SKAT"

Caronise Symons
Date: 7/17/2013 5:50:00 AM

Hi SKAT thanks for comment much appreciated, and i honestly could do with friends around here lol, i need to find my way around. speak soon XOXO

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2013 9:24:00 PM

Hi Caronise, always, and I love the poem UPLIFTING. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda

Caronise Symons
Date: 7/17/2013 5:48:00 AM

Hi Linda thanks for the Sweet comment . sorry for only replying now.., i am new to this site and i'm searching for places i can post my poetry and enter contest. but honestly i dont know much about poetry, like the forms and all that, i write on what i feel at that point and time. i could use some guidance, would you assist me please :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 6/14/2013 5:27:00 PM

A clever write,beautifully penned.

Kim Van Breda

Date: 6/14/2013 8:31:00 AM

Amen to that.!! Beautiful poem of truth about our Lord and Saviour. Welcome to P/Soup fellow S.A. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/14/2013 6:37:00 AM

- Hi Caronise, a very lovely poem. - Thank you - Welcome to P-Soup! - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Have fun with poetry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Rose

Date: 6/14/2013 5:03:00 AM

beautifully put, I am not a religious person but I do believe in a higher power whether it be God himself or some truly Holy Spirit. Your words spoke to me, well done! thank you for the good read this morning.