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Life - The Grand Experiment

This world is only an experiment The proof of life and its existence It's only a creation of the human mind The final outcome of this experiment Has yet to really be revealed in kind Many thoughts on this vital subject How can the mind create such joy And yet despair at a life gone wrong Into an amazing paradox we belong

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Date: 3/5/2024 5:20:00 AM
wow, your poem knocked me off my feet this morning, dear Jack! Amazingly insightful poem with powerful messages. I agree, this world is a creation of our mind, our thoughts being reflected back at us. And that paradox you mention? The juxtaposition of joy and sadness always perplex me. Thanks for your wisdom today! hugs, Sara (faving)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/5/2024 5:35:00 AM
Was wondering where this was going??? Thank you dear Sara! As I was writing I thought to myself "where did did the jolly old Jack go" Thanks for the fav dear Sara! xxx

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