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Life - Is What You Make It

Birth of a new child Brings joy to the world A new beginning A circle of hope No beginning and no end You learn to talk Then told to be quiet You learn to walk Only to be pushed about for miles You learn to use your hands To its enth degree But told don’t touch unless it belongs to thee. This is how your life progresses You learn but told not to do there is one word that cocks a snoot at us all It’s used with fear yet welcomed by some Death……………

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/13/2014 8:01:00 PM
A poem of truth , I love it .
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Darren Watson
Date: 3/13/2014 11:31:00 PM
Can't reply to soup mail yet Seren , Haven't worked it out yet . I've only just learned how to write a blog, lol
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/13/2014 11:26:00 PM
Thanks .....Seren
Date: 3/11/2014 12:55:00 AM
This is an awesome take for the contest, you did submit this for the contest right? I surely loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a fantastic piece my friend! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/12/2014 2:16:00 AM
thanks Russel ....Seren
Date: 3/10/2014 11:31:00 PM
† "Life, Is What 'OUR HEAVENLY HOLY FATHER,'" Makes It! .... Love John
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/12/2014 2:16:00 AM
Amen to that....Seren

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