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Lies the Crystal Ball Collaboration

Woman of your dreams, someone just like me, with brunette hair and emerald eyes - lies the crystal ball, a princess no doubt, like Diana, will stun and bait, kick against your heart - run after her wavy hair, her slim bodacious frame. Escape from me to her amidst the falling snow but be quick to see the polished apple that she bit. Reader of the stars, they fall with angel wings and you’ll be dead before your two lips meet. Someone just like me, stared at you from afar. Far off eyes stare at a perfect night, ebonite cold, missing sweet rose petals spread on a lover’s bed. 9/3/2020 Sponsor, and with, Line Gauthier collaborated Contest: MAX 12 LINES - poem-inspired prompt Line’s lines in italics

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Date: 9/6/2020 1:41:00 AM
I would have never guessed this was penned from someone else's ideas or lines. Wow! I am glad you shared that. They meld as one soul.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2020 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 9/4/2020 2:55:00 PM
I like how this puts you as the "right one" and it reminded me of that song Taylor Swift sang, but now I forgot the title. How it's YOU that is the one the guy should love!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2020 5:45:00 PM
Yes! Exactly, my friend!
Date: 9/3/2020 8:14:00 PM
A masterpiece of superb writing, Kim! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Best wishes for the contest. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2020 8:27:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 9/3/2020 5:45:00 PM
Ooooh! Wickedly good, Kim! Hall & Oates were right all along -- She's a 'Man-eater!' Here's to a Big Win! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2020 7:08:00 PM
LOL! She is indeed!

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