Lies Pardon

forgive the liars pronounce words of fantasy selling illusions For Forgiveness Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo Third Place 8-20-2016

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Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/23/2016 1:09:00 PM

Loved the lines,Nayda!Congrats on your win!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/23/2016 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Sara

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 5:06:00 PM

Nayda, your poem is short, but a very deep 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 3rd Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/21/2016 5:19:00 PM

Thank you Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 8/21/2016 10:54:00 AM

Nayda, forgiving liars can be difficult. When you said pronounce words of fantasy, I took it as it's almost impossible to forgive? very powerful lady...congrats on your placement and thank you very much for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/21/2016 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Laura. I felt very honoured with my placement. Congratulations to all the winners.