Lies

circumstances avoiding circumstance ~ avoiding consequences By David Kavanagh

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Judy Ball

Date: 4/18/2021 7:31:00 PM

I agree with Christopher here When you ignore circumstances to avoid other circumstances there are consequences. A good write for both of you. God Bless, JB

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/18/2021 10:57:00 PM

Heya Judy indeed Christopher is right the consequences in my mono is a perpetuation of lies, when Christopher and I get together chatting, we usually come up with a broader spectrum of interpretation, which is great, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 4/18/2021 2:12:00 PM

Consequences

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/18/2021 2:46:00 PM

My thoughts exactly

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/18/2021 2:41:00 PM

Cause and causality, one perpetuating the other

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2021 10:15:00 AM

what a monoku!! I am seeing a bunch of them today but I do not know why. I can't find a contest on them!! Anyway, I sure enjoyed this one.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/18/2021 10:59:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, it’s weird the way a bunch of them appear together, maybe one subliminally influences another, I was afraid people might not make sense of this one, it sounds contradictory, but there is meaning embedded, cheers David

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/16/2021 3:29:00 PM

We need to void all circumstances that are harmful to the soul. what a brilliant line dear poet. Thank you for sharing. :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/17/2021 12:40:00 AM

Yes indeed Mystic Rose (void) is the word, not avoid, that would nullify my equation, otherwise it just perpetuates into a Möbius strip. thank you for looking in, Cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/16/2021 12:27:00 PM

The context is to avoid decoherence, too many meanings in almost one word, superb monoku David, Happy to see you back, have a nice afternoon with my regards to you.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/16/2021 12:49:00 PM

My goodness I never thought of the quantum properties, your a very clever guy Lasaad, I appreciate your insight and kind comments, thanks for looking in, cheers David