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I am wondering
is his brain cell on time share...
talks out his backside

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Terry Flood

Date: 9/16/2023 2:25:00 PM

Nice one, Jan. I guess that’s why he talks sh*t

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2023 4:03:00 PM

hahaha you have got it in one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 9/15/2023 10:52:00 AM

lol Jan. This is good stuff!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2023 1:15:00 PM

thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Arastu Goyal

Date: 9/15/2023 3:43:00 AM

Nicely said! I agree with it, and sadly I too know a few people like this. Clever write, Jan :-) -AG

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2023 7:37:00 AM

I think we all can relate AG, hugs jan xx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/14/2023 6:03:00 PM

I know several people this would apply to Jan. Most are easy to figure out, but some people are very good at it. Have a good day.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2023 7:37:00 AM

me too Jerry, some are so accomplished at lies they even believe their own! hugs Jan xx

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/14/2023 5:12:00 PM

good one, questionning is important, yann

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2023 5:15:00 PM

thanks Yann xx:-) hugs jan x

Bill Baker

Date: 9/14/2023 2:59:00 PM

Lol at this one, Jan. Right on target for a lot of people these days. Bill

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2023 3:16:00 PM

too true Bill, I can't abide it but see it all the time here lol full of hot air and fibs:-(hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/14/2023 12:41:00 PM

ha! you've put this very well, jan! i know quite a few people this could apply to...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2023 1:29:00 PM

Me too lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2023 11:43:00 AM

- With new shoes there will always be something that squeaks ... old shoes leak and smell like shit :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2023 1:29:00 PM

ha ha ha that is a class comment Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/14/2023 10:46:00 AM

The fact that you wrote brain "cell" and not "cells", Jan, tells me something already smells fishy about this guy. Thanks Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2023 11:22:00 AM

lol thanks Jeff xx

Lin Lane
Date: 9/14/2023 10:59:00 AM

Nice observation, Jeff!

Lin Lane

Date: 9/14/2023 10:19:00 AM

Must leave a lovely aroma for his neighbors. Pinocchio Syndrome.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2023 3:59:00 PM

hope you liked my tall tale Lin lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 11:36:00 AM

- I had to google it, Lin :))) - "Pinocchio syndrome is known in psychiatry by the name of “pathological lying” or also by the name of “mythomania.”-

Lin Lane
Date: 9/14/2023 11:36:00 AM

I read, I giggled... I giggled some more.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2023 11:21:00 AM

ha ha ha Lin Ive just done a very long poem on Pinocchio but its not suitable for soup lol. I will send it to you for a giggle xx

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