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Lickety Split

Living Independtly Can cause Keepsake Encounters To turn into traumatized Yearnings So some People Leave Intimacy Twisting ... CayCay Jennings April 13, 2018

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John Gondolf

Date: 4/18/2018 5:08:00 AM

Very well done, CayCay, much wisdom in a few words. Good luck in the contest. Hope all is well with you. John

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/17/2018 7:39:00 AM

I like your take on the contest Cay Cay.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/16/2018 5:14:00 PM

Very clever, Cay Cay, and I admire the brevity of words. I left intimacy twisting long ago. LOL Nice work! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/16/2018 3:10:00 AM

Great one. Simple (a compliment) and straight to the point. Good luck in the contest. Kai

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/15/2018 11:28:00 AM

Much wisdom and truth told in few words - so reflective and moving -

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/15/2018 6:08:00 PM

Thank you so very much. I have had little Soup time as of late, in fact, I think this write has been the extent of my efforts and I've not had a chance to read. Please be patient with me, you are so sweet to read/comment on mine as you have. I appreciate you ... CayCay

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/15/2018 1:29:00 AM

This is pretty good for a licketty-split last second mad dash, CayCay, good luck! Viv x

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/15/2018 6:09:00 PM

I've been too busy for my body lately! It is all good though. Enjoyed your comments, always do. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2018 6:16:00 PM

Very well done in a lickety split second before the contest finished. Oh, I miss you TOO, my good friend. I am having a terrible frustrating day, so I only saw my 8 comments since I was here yesterday and I owe tons of comments to Line who has been visiting many of my poems, such a sweetie. I think I'll just go walk my dog and try not to worry that my computer may be broken. If it is, I have lost an entry for a contest which is in one of my files I can't get to. Have a good night.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/14/2018 7:40:00 PM

No, your computer can't die, no, not like mine did for 8 months! Please update me on your computers health asap! Say it ain't so! Well, I've been on 10 minutes and reckon that's it for tonight. Some day we'll really talk, soon. Love, CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2018 6:16:00 PM

I'm on Joe's laptop but I need my Desk top to do school stuff by Monday. OH MY

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/14/2018 7:41:00 PM

I've got to do Tim's taxes. OH MY - lions and tigers and bears!

Constance La France

Date: 4/14/2018 5:06:00 PM

CayCay, this is great, best of luck in the contest, ooops, I think I did mine wrong, oh well ~

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/14/2018 7:34:00 PM

I quickly wrote to grab the last contest 'slot' last night and didn't ponder too long after seeing how mini-worded her example was. I slammed, shot it, but I've no idea if I scored two points. Please see your page for my response about your 'wrong' concern! All the best .. CayCay

Eve Roper

Date: 4/14/2018 1:27:00 PM

Love this, it is fantastic.. I placed the short one first in the contest then reread the instructions and went for the long one. What do you think the short one or the long one? Please help ! Luck in the contest Hugs Eve

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/14/2018 7:32:00 PM

You are an Aquarius, I'm a Libra - this means we could have a delightful time debating which one, which one indeed? Here I pause to do my internal debate ... ok, one is a great irrelevant, off-the-wall and amusing acrostic that I thoroughly enjoyed, while the hummingbirds are definitely at work in a lickety split fashion so I'm going with the later for purposes of the contest theme. How'd I do? You've no idea how long my pause was, wanted to give you a carefully Libra-weighed opinion! I've had fun here. Hope I helped. Poetry hugs ... CayCay