Liar

Let it be known she lies - Lies with the greatest ease. Loved her I surely did - Lost her I did that, too. Laughed when I called her a Lowdown cheat as her horse Loped off with her lover. 4/16/2017 For contest Pleiades - L

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Mark Martin

Date: 4/27/2017 12:41:00 PM

Congratulations Larry! :-)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2017 9:58:00 PM

A short story in poem form! Great flow to your lines, Larry! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/19/2017 11:00:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! You have fun contests and I'm always pleased if I can place in one....Larry

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/18/2017 4:00:00 PM

Congrats, Larry!

Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/18/2017 9:50:00 PM

Thank you, Kim!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2017 1:27:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Larry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/18/2017 9:50:00 PM

Thank you!!

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/17/2017 11:39:00 AM

Oh, the things we do for love, and the things that happen to us in the name of it. Cheers, Larry, well done. : )

Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/17/2017 11:53:00 AM

I see you have been there, my friend! Thanks..Larry

Niall Fulham

Date: 4/17/2017 9:19:00 AM

Hi Larry, Good write:))) hugs from Ireland

Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/17/2017 9:55:00 AM

Thank you.Glad you like it. Like so many Americans, my grandmother was born in Ireland, but I've not yet been fortunate enough to visit!!..Larry