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Level of Brokenness

Author Dana Redricks April 30, 2024 The level of Brokenness runs so deep even if I tried to explain I feel no one could understand. The pain in my heart has left a hole in my soul, and only God Yahweh can make me whole. My past haunts me, and how I long to be free My heart is broken and just like humpty Dumpty, I just want to be put back together again. I want to be loved, but I think how someone loves somebody as broken as me. I carry around this burden in my external body seeking sweet release in smoke, in a bottle, or in a package, but no relief. I'm screaming inwardly, but no one can hear me, if people could see what I see. They would see a person dying slowly, and I long for the Lord to deliver me.

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Date: 5/3/2024 7:15:00 PM
What a powerful write sending prayers and recovery many blessings.
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Dana Redricks
Date: 5/8/2024 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Yolanda.

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