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Letting Go

Love-plants took time to grow Every seed was sown in a sweet shadow To you goes the whole credit Tenderly and intensely you did it In tense moments of charged soul Nucleus was in a fusion goal Green words then one day stopped coming for the rhyme Gems of freedom no more in flames sublime Oomph in designs of sad decline Now you say you will change your room O’er my book the candle flickers Groves have been gathering grave gloom Let it go, no point in bickers My time will move slow The wound will take time to heal Stay well, let it go ______________________________________________________ March 4, 2016 For Contest – Letting Go-Three Form Style Sponsor: Laura Loo Forms Required: Acrostic, Quatrain, Senryu 5-7-5 Syllables

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Date: 4/14/2016 8:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 11:43:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 4/13/2016 9:40:00 PM
Probir Gupta, Congratulations on your "Letting Go win." XOX ~LINDA~
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2016 9:58:00 PM
Thanks ~LINDA~
Date: 4/13/2016 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Probir :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2016 8:15:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 4/13/2016 1:35:00 PM
Probir, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2016 8:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Laura...
Date: 4/4/2016 6:13:00 AM
Well done Probir, best wishes in the contest....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/4/2016 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Charlie...

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