Anil Deo Poet Concrete

Letters: of Forgiveness

 f, O, r 
 g, I, v 
 e, N, s 

FIRE!
SENSES on fire
For Sins


Forgiven
O Risen One
Forgive sins 
Forgive foreigners
Fine roses for forgiven
Fires for forgiveness
No envies, rivenness
No "Ins" vs. "foreigners"

SEVEN SIGNS
SING SONGS
On FORGIVENESS

Sin is forgiven 
foreigner never goes for reign of sin
Forging "IRENE" even in oven
Frogs gone in ovens giving SEVENS ...
Over. Gone! Envision Gone forever

Envisioning Signs for Forgiveness
Fine Vines Ever
Finesse Forgiveness
For Risen One Is VINE
Never grins for sins
Forging Oneness ever!

Finesse forgiveness ever
Sin, rivenness ... over in vision for evenness
Everness is forever
Is ONENESS
For giving, ever giving
Fires gone! No fingers, no orgies, no ogres
For Risen One Forgives ever

Rose over Senses
Origin of Giving,
Forgiving, Serving,
Foreigners, Signers, Sinners ... 

RING for IRENE, Sing For Risen One
FIRE for Forgiven gone forever
Seven Servings Even For Frogs 
FROGGIES GOING FOR FORGIVENESS
(c) Deo, May 4, 2017.

NOTE: All words in this story - even THE RISEN ONE - are constructed of the same NINE letters (of the alphabet) that are used in the word: "Forgiveness."

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Debbie Duncan August 20, 2017 at 4:54 PM Forgiveness is always good for the soul. That's what I say, but just don't make that mistake again. Thank you for reading my Just A Little Humor". I shall have to read more of your words :)

Jesse Zerlaut July 8, 2017 at 10:26 PM Forgiveness is so important, my friend. I see you haven't written in a couple months, I miss seeing new ink from you. I hope you return with more work soon. Or maybe I can't forgive you. :D Anil Deo August 14, 2017 at 11:21 AM Here I come Jesse. Shalom, shalom (Sad: Dedication for Heather Heyer)

Paul Callus May 6, 2017 at 4:07 PM It is interesting how 9 letters combine and intertwine to produce such an entertaining poem, Anil! Indeed, very creative. By not forgetting we stand to learn from our mistakes and be on our guard; it is in not forgiving that we make a grave mistake! Regards // paul

Miraj Raha May 5, 2017 at 7:30 PM I am envious of the theme Anil, Brilliant!!!!

Eileen Manassian May 5, 2017 at 2:53 AM Interesting...The theme of forgiveness is such an important one, Anil. I'm glad you gave a footnote at the end to explain it. I didn't quite get the frogs allusion. I hope you enlighten me. Blessings