Notes About The Poem

Hi hope all are well.  Sorry have not been around.  Life has been hectic.

This poem was written after a friend challenged me to write a letter to my future self.

Give it a go....

Letter To My Future Self

Hey are you still breathing?
Are you still believing,
or is your heart seething?
Does life still have meaning?
How's the word weaving,
is the ink still bleeding?
Tell me, does your poetry still flow?
How do your flowers grow?
Seeds you used to sow,
do their colours still glow,
or did they die in the snow?
I wonder if your mind is still sane,
or is illness hurting your brain.
Do the pills heal the pain,
or do demons now reign?

Can you hear your mother's voice?

Do your children still rejoice?
Are your siblings still close,
or have relationships froze?
Do the ghosts still appear,
or did the shadows disappear?
Are you still the one who is silent,
have you kept from being violent?
Did you dance again with cancer,
did adversity give you an answer?
Did you always remain strong,
even when life did you wrong?
Are you loving, laughing or crying,
I hope you are not close to dying.
Is your spirit still ascending,
have you become tired of pretending?
Remember when I forgot to smile,
but regret left after a while,
so I hope you gained all that you yearned,
and all your dreams were returned.
Hope you found what you desired
and the journey kept you inspired.
Despite the difficulty of distance,
is she still the reason for your existence?
In the arms of your wonder woman,
resting your head upon her soft bosom.
Hope you rise to your beloved's eyes,
who understands your invisible cries. 
Who makes your starry soul beam,
ignites the flames of your spirit's gleam.
Living forever in each other's heart,
till death tries to keep you both apart.

Sorry for writing this using rhymes,
I know it annoys you sometimes!

13 September 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Galia Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 11:37 AM
Amazing poem.So many emotions in a poem.I hope you are doing fine. Stay healthy Stay blessed !
George Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 5:34 AM
Despite the trials, struggles and sickness of life, there are moments to look forward to with hope and cheer and there are strong and kind shoulders to lean upon !"Did you always remain strong, even when life did you wrong? Are you loving, laughing or crying" These are questions one should often ask oneself ! As ever great write, dear friend !
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 11:42 AM
So many questions..one wonders what the future has in store for! Belated congratulations for p.o.t.d. award // paul
Macfarlane Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 4:00 PM
Smiling. This is one awesome write Silent One. Congratulations for this great well deserved POTD . Hugs
Brul Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Such a great letter to self! Very therapeutic…masterfully written! Congratulations on POTD.
Canerdy Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 8:32 PM
No wonder this poem was declared POTD. It is thoughtful, expressive--a masterpiece! Janice
Zahid Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 9:40 AM
You always amaze us... Such a wonderful poem... I like the flow.. I hope he will smile while reading this. And will write back to you to inform you how content he is...
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 5:01 PM
POTD I think I see in the comments? Wow, big congratulations, S.O.(the ending couplet was So CUTE)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 11:38 AM
- Back ... with both smiles, laughter and tears ... love your come back, my friend ... (I'm almost gone ... :) - Congratulations on p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roy Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 12:12 AM
An excellent write. Liked the flow and rhyming. God bless you.
Doll Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 4:47 PM
Silent One , a true gem of a poem deserving POTD honors, Congratulations~ Warren
Proxenos Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 1:52 PM
Silent One this is an incredible poem , I love how you suddenly appear and wow POTD so deserved - missed your incredible poetry -congratulations my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Hamill Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on POTD.i think the use of rhyme is brilliant.well deserved.all the best.simon
Lindley Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 12:11 PM
My friend , congratulations for this truly great POTD! I love the use of rhymes and everything about this true masterpiece. A fav... God bless....
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Hello silent One, i am proud of you my friend. Yes you deserved it. Enjoy your day my friend.
Sands Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations for this great POTD , Silent One :)
May Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Congrats on POTD Silent
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations, Dear Poet. We miss you here - it's great to see your brilliant poem being honoured! Enjoyed every line - able to relate to so many innermost thoughts! BW ~ Mala
Peck Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 8:59 AM
An inspiring poem! We probably should all write a small history of ourselves so we know where we are in this big world. I think it was a brave write! Congratulations on POTD.
Evans Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations.... most of all its really nice to hear from you. You had so masterly and skillfully penned such a profound poem, thoughts and questions that some of us ponder and yet brush away trying to focus on the present for we don't really know what the future holds. You had written and laid them out so sensitively and honestly... brilliant... for us to think about...thank you for sharing... Have a Blessed day and take care....
Nicole Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 8:26 AM
"I hope you are not close to dying" If only future self could turn back such moments. I say this, because my younger brother just lost his best friend of 32yrs, due to Covid. Your thoughts tug deeply at the heartstrings. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Rone Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 8:20 AM
I didnt want it to end. I was mesmerized. - Ken
Goldsmith Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 8:15 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your POTD win. "Love This" Think about framing this amazing write for your wall. Letter to self can be helpful. Had a friend, write a note in a birthday card & mailed it so it would come on his birthday. So glad to see you here. Have a great/blessed day with your win......................
DiMino Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations, Si! Wow, you just don't come back, you rock the earth of Soup. This is poem of the year, let alone poem of the day. The back and forth of the emotions we feel, driving us in all our thoughts and deeds. Great rythym and imagery galore...! A true masterpiece. Thank you for sharing.
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