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What are those things I do not know I've done, to make you hate me so? I've searched my mind for most a life For what I worked to bring you strife And as I sift thoughts past, thereof Those mem'ries only breathe of love The moments, many, spent with you Midst yearning's tender rendezvous Yet, I'm within your heart and head The brute you feel were better dead I wonder, do you wait those words Of my swift passing? And once heard Will then not come the smallest start Of longings, deep within your heart For all sweet, tender moments, ours The petals of those thornless flowers That bloomed so many bygone years And grew from love, as well as tears That you have somehow made a sin Oh, how can such crimes ever spin? The dearest love you've turned awry And I've not but the question, why? Now, when I leave, my final thought Will be, what is this crime I wrought That took my dearest love from me? Oh pray, can you please help me see? Can you not spare one crumb this bread Before your first true love ... is dead?

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Date: 9/28/2020 7:44:00 AM
thought provoking indeed & beautifully worded
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Date: 9/7/2020 10:54:00 PM
Greg, these are the kinds of thoughts that keep one awake at night, wondering what was said or done to offend, playing over the conversations or actions that made a lover run away without closure. Eloquently stated (and in pitch-perfect metre), as always. ~ John
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Date: 9/7/2020 7:10:00 PM
What’s going on Greg?
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