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Dear Harrison, You're selfish, and controlling You steal stuff, and you lie You're concieted, you're annoying You just make me want to DIE. You think you know just everything The biggest brain beneath that hat I pray for you, despite the anger, I really hope you change all that. You lied to me, to everyone It's a habit, it's compulsive, see I'm glad you're having so much fun To be as monstrous as can be. You're childish, and vain Never humble, always bragging You're never happy, never tame And you're always, ALWAYS, nagging. You wear shirts to show your muscles, You use big words to show you're smart But honestly, it's not impressive It was annoying from the start. You can't even keep your pants up, they're always on the floor I gave you hugs, I gave you kisses And yet you beg for MORE. I know you so much better, than you'll ever know yourself So to you I've wrote this letter, You don't like it? Go to hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/28/2011 11:54:00 AM
Wow, what can I say.....Thanks for the comment..............George
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Date: 3/28/2011 4:04:00 AM
Ooooh a powerful write. The emotions are great. Thanks for your comments.
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Date: 3/27/2011 7:16:00 PM
Freakin' awesome. Now walk into the bathroom, look in the mirror and smile at that courageous young woman looking back at you. Get to know her. You'll find she's pretty damn cool. Vince
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Date: 3/27/2011 2:06:00 PM
I like it!! A wonderful write!! Caryl
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Date: 3/27/2011 2:00:00 PM
Reads like many men in this world..Very creative..Good rhyme and rythm..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..SAra
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:59:00 PM
Dana'lynn, Now that you've spoken to him from your heart, it's time to forgive him and start moving on. You need to heal from this toxic relationship. Ask God for help and be around others close to you. - Mike
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:22:00 PM
Gosh, it sounds like you're better off without a man like this in your life, Dana'lynn. Strong words! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:03:00 PM
Yes, yes, this must be the spirit when someone makes you unhappy as you say, "you don't like it? Go to hell" your last line is the remedy, Dana
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