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Let's Go Back

Let's go back to a different time When the touch of a young woman's hand was sublime And chivalry wasn't a sexist crime Before civilization fell. Where innocence and love combined On the back porch swing as the Autumn moon shined Happiness was more than a state of mind Before it all went to hell. We captured moonbeams and put them away in jars Made love in the back seat of our cars Lied in a field and gazed at the stars And dreamed of a bright tomorrow. It seems like something we could not avert They took our good feelings and replaced them with hurt Then took something beautiful and changed it to dirt Filling our lives with sorrow. Let's go back to that special place Let me see that smile upon your face Regret and sorrow, we can find no trace And the sun shines high above. Let's go back to a different land Where lives aren't built on shifting sand And we can hold our dreams in the palm of our hand And the world is full of love.

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Date: 2/7/2009 6:19:00 PM
That was my experience in my teenage years back in Europe. Pure love and beauty of the soul. A reality long time gone... Congratulations for being featured this week. Love, iolanda
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Date: 2/5/2009 6:20:00 PM
As always Vince just exceptional in both penmanship and message - I hope all is well with you and the family - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/4/2009 8:38:00 AM
If only! Those times are still there, we must be open to them, work for them and accept them, but yet we're mostly blind to them. Excellent write and congrats on the feature. MIchael
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Date: 2/4/2009 6:41:00 AM
Vince Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura
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Date: 2/3/2009 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Vince. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2009 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week, God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha
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Date: 2/2/2009 12:53:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Vince Rgds Brian Like the sentiments
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Date: 2/1/2009 3:26:00 PM
congrats on having this wonderful poem featured this week!..*/*Maryam
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Date: 2/1/2009 2:31:00 PM
I was sure I commented on this some time ago ... maybe I just read it ... LOL ... anyway, I enjoyed it very much then and its still great, Vince ... great feature for the week here at the Soup! Congratulations.
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Date: 2/1/2009 12:22:00 PM
Congrats Vince on the feature this week.
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations dear Vince this beautiful, wishful poem being featured this week. They were indeed magic times. If you ever find a way to go back, please let me know. : ) Love, Shar
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