Jenish Somadas Poet Etheree

Let World Smile

"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life:" Robert Frost


Born with a cry and will doom in a smile,
between three dots left spaces to fill.
Fate and luck played big casinos,
but my dreams whizzed the yacht.
Breeze of love showed my way,
faith in God, propelled.
Before my boat,
kisses shore;
let world,
smile.


Third Place in BRIAN'S CHOICE U,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Sixth Place in Etheree Poetry Contest sponsored by Dear Heart

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Paul Callus May 30, 2020 at 7:51 AM Looks like you have lived life to the full, Jenish, and I am sure there is more to experience before that boat reaches shore! ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:11 AM Thank you Paul for those delightful words..

Constance La France May 28, 2020 at 12:16 PM Jenish, congratulations on your win in my contest, love your image _Constance Jenish Somadas May 29, 2020 at 12:38 AM Thank you Constance for that beautiful contest and thank you for my placement..

Aditi Mishra May 25, 2020 at 2:20 PM What a creative Etheree with a beautiful flow of words, "three dots left spaces to fill", "dreams whizzing the yacht", "boat kissing the shore", this is really deep. Congratulations on your win Jenish :) Jenish Somadas May 25, 2020 at 11:53 PM Thank you Aditi for your delightful words..

Krish Radhakrishna May 25, 2020 at 10:53 AM Great poetry and a picture to go with it! Read from below upwards, it still makes sense! Congrats on your placement! Jenish Somadas May 25, 2020 at 11:52 PM Thank you Krish for your kind words..Takecare always..

Shirley Hawkins May 21, 2020 at 6:51 PM Before my boat kisses shore; let world smile. Beautiful thought Jenish. Good luck in the contest. I love the picture ... Jenish Somadas May 22, 2020 at 4:41 AM Thank you Shirley..Now smiles are beneath the masks..

Tom Cunningham May 21, 2020 at 2:27 PM Beautifully composed Jenish. Good luck in the contest. Tom Jenish Somadas May 22, 2020 at 4:40 AM Thank you Tom..

Michelle Faulkner May 21, 2020 at 1:37 PM Lovely imagery, Jenish, especially like the line 'between three dots left spaces to fill' - best wishes for the contest. Jenish Somadas May 22, 2020 at 4:39 AM Thank you Michelle for your delightful comment..

Darlene De Beaulieu May 21, 2020 at 12:42 PM Hello Jenish Somadas, thank you for the lovely boat ride. I enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu May 22, 2020 at 1:33 PM Hello Jenish Somadas, i enjoyed the boat ride. Take care to. Jenish Somadas May 22, 2020 at 4:39 AM Thank you Darlene for being in the boat..Take care..

Arturo Michael May 21, 2020 at 12:26 PM Very kind of you... You are definitely right..."Fate and luck played big casinos," Jenish Somadas May 22, 2020 at 4:37 AM Lol..Happy to know that you can relate it..Thank you Arturo..

Vijay Pandit May 21, 2020 at 12:06 PM A splendid write, Jenish! Jenish Somadas May 22, 2020 at 4:35 AM Thank you Vijay..