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Let World Smile

"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life:" Robert Frost


Born with a cry and will doom in a smile,
between three dots left spaces to fill.
Fate and luck played big casinos,
but my dreams whizzed the yacht.
Breeze of love showed my way,
faith in God, propelled.
Before my boat,
kisses shore;
let world,
smile.


Third Place in BRIAN'S CHOICE U,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Sixth Place in Etheree Poetry Contest sponsored by Dear Heart

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Paul Callus Date: 5/30/2020 7:51:00 AM Looks like you have lived life to the full, Jenish, and I am sure there is more to experience before that boat reaches shore! ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/31/2020 2:11:00 AM Thank you Paul for those delightful words..

Constance La France Date: 5/28/2020 12:16:00 PM Jenish, congratulations on your win in my contest, love your image _Constance Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/29/2020 12:38:00 AM Thank you Constance for that beautiful contest and thank you for my placement..

Aditi Mishra Date: 5/25/2020 2:20:00 PM What a creative Etheree with a beautiful flow of words, "three dots left spaces to fill", "dreams whizzing the yacht", "boat kissing the shore", this is really deep. Congratulations on your win Jenish :) Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/25/2020 11:53:00 PM Thank you Aditi for your delightful words..

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 5/25/2020 10:53:00 AM Great poetry and a picture to go with it! Read from below upwards, it still makes sense! Congrats on your placement! Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/25/2020 11:52:00 PM Thank you Krish for your kind words..Takecare always..

Shirley Hawkins Date: 5/21/2020 6:51:00 PM Before my boat kisses shore; let world smile. Beautiful thought Jenish. Good luck in the contest. I love the picture ... Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/22/2020 4:41:00 AM Thank you Shirley..Now smiles are beneath the masks..

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/21/2020 2:27:00 PM Beautifully composed Jenish. Good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/22/2020 4:40:00 AM Thank you Tom..

Michelle Faulkner Date: 5/21/2020 1:37:00 PM Lovely imagery, Jenish, especially like the line 'between three dots left spaces to fill' - best wishes for the contest. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/22/2020 4:39:00 AM Thank you Michelle for your delightful comment..

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/21/2020 12:42:00 PM Hello Jenish Somadas, thank you for the lovely boat ride. I enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/22/2020 1:33:00 PM Hello Jenish Somadas, i enjoyed the boat ride. Take care to. Jenish Somadas Date: 5/22/2020 4:39:00 AM Thank you Darlene for being in the boat..Take care..

Arturo Michael Date: 5/21/2020 12:26:00 PM Very kind of you... You are definitely right..."Fate and luck played big casinos," Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/22/2020 4:37:00 AM Lol..Happy to know that you can relate it..Thank you Arturo..

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2020 12:06:00 PM A splendid write, Jenish! Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/22/2020 4:35:00 AM Thank you Vijay..