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Let Us Go

let us go you and I to where the water meets the sky and be one again before all is done and winter’s dim dark chill draws down hard and fast and we cower from each sullen blast of rancor hurled in hostile fling against what endures through tentative hour while waning dreams fade faster than feeble ambition can sustain abiding the angular course to quiet realms of solemn darkness in peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/31/2017 8:47:00 PM
I sensed a darkness throughout this piece, but beautifully portrayed.
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David Sermersheim
Date: 6/1/2017 7:03:00 AM
Dear Gayle, Thank you for your kind remarks about "Let Us Go". Perhaps your reaction is correct: I view many of life's experiences as "one Chance", then it's gone -- get it while you can. Best, David Sermersheim

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