The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

Let Us Finish the Race

Life is comparable
To a sports event in a game; 
Like a race, it has both
A beginning and an end.

Similar to an athletic match, 
Rules are observed by each player; 
All are required with certain codes
Of conduct and behavior.

It closely resembles
A championship bout; 
Protagonists aim at a precious prize
By fierce fight, going all out.

While the will to win
In their hearts does dwell; 
Many yet fall short of even
Getting close to the jewel.

As in the case of a race, 
Some runners stumble; 
They even miserably fail
To make it to the golden goal.

Those who get dog-tired
Would withdraw rather; 
Caring neither ignominy nor pain
They bring on each supporter.

Losers readily concede, 
Thinking they did their best; 
They reason not the win or loss 
But how they played matters.

In life, we're not mere spectators
But are the playing athletes; 
Aiming at the glorious reward
At the end of the race.

While there are similarities, 
There are also differences; 
The fight isn't between runners and us, 
But between us and the evil forces.

We cannot afford to lose
In this crucial contest with evil; 
Neither can we choose to retreat
From the spiritual big battle.

Struggle toward the finish line, 
For there is no graceful exit; 
Amid the din and the pains, 
We cannot give up and quit.

We ought to shake off the burden
Of sins right in our face; 
Run freely with determination, 
Let us finish the race.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Horn Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:36 AM
Congratulations on 3,000. You and I have quite a race going.
Asuncion Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:13 PM
Wow!!!I never knew it’s already3k... Such a friendly and poetic race between you and me.........
Horn Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 7:31 PM
It is not how many times we stumble and fall. All that matters is how we dusted clothes, got up and started running again.
Asuncion Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Thanks, James... Such comment is truly brilliant....
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