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Let there be vision

Bright blue skies shine Pieces of ice float below The sun sparkles, oh so fine On the winter water's flow White streaks of clouds pronounce Light is the prominent way to lead Snow makes the memories bounce In a pure celebration of creed Follow the river, reflections of all The steps in your life are a story Look above, along trees so tall Experience the creations glory All of this is alive in one day Not invisible, a choice to be made Vision is what leads the way Only heat brings the need for shade Heidi Sands 1/22/24 (C)opyright

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Date: 1/23/2024 2:51:00 PM
A lovely poem, my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2024 3:18:00 PM
Thank you . I appreciate your kind comments :)
Date: 1/23/2024 1:45:00 PM
What a beautiful water flow! I enjoyed reading your poem Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2024 2:12:00 PM
Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed it :)
Date: 1/23/2024 7:05:00 AM
your poem flowed beautifully. Your vision about vision is illuminating -- liked follow the river and 'vision is what leads the way.' Wise words, dear Heidi. have a splendid day, Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2024 7:12:00 AM
It is nice to see your comment this morning. Thank you Sara. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 1/23/2024 6:31:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, my friend. Much enjoyed the tone and flow.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2024 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear that. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 1/22/2024 6:42:00 PM
You're right. It's all about 'vision,' keep the eyes in the mind wide open. :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2024 6:59:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 1/22/2024 3:48:00 PM
Wonderful smooth poem!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2024 6:59:00 AM
Thank you Abdullah :)

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