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Let The Laborers Rest

Let the laborers rest, like poetry, the rhyme is in their job, as they hammer the nails, and man the railroads, maids clean someone else's toilets, others fell giant trees, as the waitresses twirl like a ballerina balancing plates amid the din of a crowded diner, migrant farmworkers bend in the savage sun's glare to pick the produce. Let the laborers rest, their aching bodies in sleep's bliss, like poetry, the rhyme is in their job, it pumps their hearts and blood, the rhythm of the workers of the world. A fellow laborer of my brother, was dying of lung cancer, he toiled up to four days before he died. God let this laborer rest, and He closed His servant's eyes. ~

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Date: 12/12/2023 5:27:00 PM
a poignant poem, Regina, with a tender and powerful ending. I loved your imagery, especially these lines: as the waitresses twirl like a ballerina balancing plates amid the din of a crowded diner...I can actually see that image. Well done...am faving, hugs, Sara
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Regina Elliott
Date: 12/13/2023 11:46:00 AM
Deepest gratitude to you, Sara. Thank you so much for the FAV, very appreciated. A hearty Congratulations on your 1st Place finish in Ink Empress's latest contest. Bravo!
Date: 12/12/2023 2:32:00 PM
What a beautiful ending to an excellent poem, Regina. When I used to work in restaurants way back when, some nights it seemed as if the whole shift was a ballet, occasionally speeded up a bit too much, nevertheless --- At any rate, you have expressed the rhythm of work so well! Bravo, Gershon
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Regina Elliott
Date: 12/13/2023 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, good friend. I think many people, no matter if they're middle class, wealthy, etc., should do restaurant work for at least two weeks for the experience. I worked in a restaurant too, and I know exactly what you mean by it's like a ballet. When they opened the doors at 11 a.m. it was a stampede, lol!
Date: 12/12/2023 11:23:00 AM
A wonderful message. I i liked the last two lines best! You acknowledged many have no use for Him. As you if worldly wins mean a thing! Helping others become winners isthe big pr I know you to be like that! You are not one to blow your own horn. So I will choose it for you.. I know your contribution to this universe, and they go far beyond on poetry. I found this poem to be very touching and very much you. Pangie
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Regina Elliott
Date: 12/13/2023 11:53:00 AM
You're so kind and thoughtful, Pangie. My deepest thanks to you. Hugs xxxx
Date: 12/12/2023 9:43:00 AM
A sad and beautiful ending…
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Regina Elliott
Date: 12/13/2023 11:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim. When my brother first told me this moving and heart-rending true story, I took pen to paper. Joyous Christmas blessings to you and your family. All the best. ~
Date: 12/12/2023 7:37:00 AM
I can picture this in my head.. as each nail is dug in you are inspired to write... but then it takes a very sad turn, so sorry to hear about your brother's friend, as a cancer survivor, I know your pain and the pain his family will be feeling...
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Regina Elliott
Date: 12/13/2023 12:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for coming by and reading this poem, Silent One. So glad to hear you overcame cancer. When my brother told me this heart-rending story, I took pen to paper to tell his coworker's poignant story while protecting his privacy. Have a joyous Christmastide, good poetry friend. ~

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