Let the Games Begin

B.C., seven hundred seventy-six
was the date of the first Olympic picks.
They held (these sportsmanship pioneers)
Olympiads ev'ry four years

The first Olympic race was for sprinters -
Corubus, a chef, was named the winner.
Running one hundred ninety-two meters
he took the lead without any sneakers.

There were no medals; first place got a wreath
worn on his head, twisted from olive leaf.
Second and third place got only glory -
plus bragging rights in telling their story.

Men competed in the nude at the start;
women were invited "not" to take part.
These games were stopped by Roman signature:
“Way too pagan,” declared the emperor.

Make no mistake; it’s not a mystery
exclusive to Athens’ sports history.
What we still call the “modern” Olympics -
were revived back in eighteen ninety-six.

Nineteen-o-four, here in my own country,
my grandmother traveled to St. Louis.
The Games were held as part of the World’s Fair;
Granny Emma and three sisters worked there.

written August 13, 2016
for Janis Thompson's Olympic Mania contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/6/2016 12:58:00 PM
Its great to see how much creativity this contest has brought. Wonderful poem you have here. Congrats! Sunita :)
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Date: 9/6/2016 4:38:00 AM
I love this poem. And what a story to be told with your Granny. My own mother would have made the German team once, but then fascism and WWII interfered. Congratulations on your win and many wishes, Kai
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Date: 9/5/2016 1:17:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading the history of the Olympics and how your Granny and aunts worked at one so long ago, Reason. Nicely written, and congrats on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/4/2016 11:21:00 PM
Lovely history of the Olympics and a family story too. Congratulations. Love,Joyce
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Date: 9/4/2016 9:46:00 PM
Recounting the history! Enjoyed! Congrats!
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Date: 10/8/2016 8:30:00 PM
Thanks, Kim, actually it was only a quarter of my one and only 100-line poem. Did it for a contest at another poetry place and I don't think the host ever read it. I usually go for brevity myself.
Date: 9/4/2016 9:09:00 PM
Reason, Congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/4/2016 9:04:00 PM
I really learned a lot from this. Good write. History is important and I tried to include winners that discussed Olympic history. Congratulations and thanks for being in my contest.
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Date: 9/4/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thanks for considering the history of the Olympics as well as the drama and other more significant features. I enjoyed the write as well. I appreciate the placement, Janis.
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