Let Sun Go

Beams dripped, from the yellow moon
And we did drown in a frenzied dance,
Not dreaming, that dawn would bloom
And wake us from - our mystic trance. 
 
Owls hailed us, with their wild whoops,
And gloom bloomed, our lusty hopes; 
With hasty steps, we danced with groups 
That measured their steps, on tightropes.

Played Night herons - raspy, croaking calls,
Yet a rooster played, “cock-a-doodle-doo,”
And shadows fainted on - darkened walls,
Alarming us, the trespassing, morning hue. 

To love ... a divine lover stopped the sun,
Yet, my love ... I’m simply a mortal one;
Hence, let him come, for that’s his run,
And faster we can run, and dive in fun. 


*A 1st Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 11, 2020)

Sept. 6, 2020
COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (24)any form any theme Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

*5th Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 10, 2020) 

The night of passion and desire
Contest Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal
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Rose  Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 3:00 PM
You dove right into it dear poet, an amazing poem to boot. have a great day
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie, for this fascinating comment!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Lovely wording! Congratulations!
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 8:48 PM
Thank you so much, Kim, for this sweet comment!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 1:05 PM
what a lively one. Great imagery, and congrats for your win , Newton
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 1:39 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for your sweet comment!!
Ermine Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 3:22 AM
... Sense your dedication, Newton. Your neat and pretty poem thrives with smart simplicity. A deserved Winner here. Congratulations!
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 1:37 PM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for this immensely great comment and well-wishes!!
Ajmal Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 12:38 PM
A lovely poem and a delight to read, "yet my love I am simply a mortal one", a line indicating the cruelty of life, many congratulations on your win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 1:47 PM
Thank you so much, Faraz, for your visit, great comment and for considering this piece for a placement in your contest!!
Andresen Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 10:46 AM
- “cock-a-doodle-doo” ... a lovely poem, Newton :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 12:05 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this immensely lovely comment!!
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