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Let Our Hearts and Souls

Let our souls be free It has no home Let our hearts borrow And keep love to own Let our hearts lead the way Should it be blind and hollow? Let our love shine through And lead us to follow Let our hearts last the ages Young lover’s for long Let our souls meet in heaven Should our hearts be strong?

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Franci Hoffman

Date: 7/30/2022 10:17:00 AM

Beautifully written. Heartfelt and succinct.

Justin Abdool
Date: 7/30/2022 12:51:00 PM

Thank you kindly

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 7/30/2022 8:30:00 AM

lovely write

Justin Abdool
Date: 7/30/2022 9:12:00 AM

Thank You, Yolanda!

Chinedum Ekwobi

Date: 7/30/2022 5:24:00 AM

In the gentlest of tone fed by Innocence, The Poem Let Our Hearts and Souls reasserts the generally accepted First Position of Love in The World of Humans.

Justin Abdool
Date: 7/30/2022 7:08:00 AM

Thank you, Chinedum!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/6/2021 5:54:00 AM

Wise and succinct. An excellent first offering to the soup. A belated welcome. I hope you are enjoying your time here. ;0) Rick.

Justin Abdool
Date: 6/6/2021 6:11:00 AM

Thanks, Richard. I really am. Glad you liked it. Have a great day my friend.

Justin Abdool

Date: 2/13/2021 7:07:00 AM

Thanks Milvee. It's the complete opposite for me. it's actually harder for me to express my words in complete sentences. But I'm sure that you can do it. And I can too. There's nothing you can't do if you put your mind to it! Have a great day, My friend.

Milvee Labajo

Date: 2/13/2021 4:41:00 AM

I admire poems such as this. Few words per line but says a lot. I struggle with this because I tend to express like a complete sentence .