Let Me Take You To a Place You'Ve Never Been

(Please let me take you) To a place you've never been

Your heart, once, was lost – 
In a dark and desolate place,
You found a way to save yourself – 
pain was the only cost

You found your heart inside you – 
you...never knew it was there,
It just needed to be loved- 
to feel, that, somebody cared

CHORUS
And, if you would only let me
I’ll take you -  
to a place you’ve never been
A place – 
beyond the stars of heaven,
where you and I begin,
It’s a place, 
we’ve never been to
but, I’m sure that- 
you will love it there,
A love- 
beyond all horizons
Please let me... take you there!


Love has never been, 
expressed to you, in a tender way
how could you have ever known, 
that love would come, and save the day

I helped you to believe, 
that you were, worthy of love
all that you needed to see - 
there was nothing to be afraid of.

CHORUS
And, if you would only, let me
I’ll take you -  
to a place you’ve never been
A place – 
beyond the stars of heaven,
Where you and I begin,
It’s a place-
we’ve never been to
but, I’m sure- you will love it there,
A love- beyond all horizons
Please let me, take you there!

Repeat chorus  fade

John Derek Hamilton June 11,2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Duet Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 8:54 PM
So lovely and sweet. Great lyrics to what I bet would be a great song.
Hamilton Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Thanks Carol, I thought I replied already to this but I guess not!
George   Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 2:44 AM
Beautiful! Simply beautiful, John. I see the wee small hours of the morning inspire you too. This is when I do most of my writing. Elaine
Hamilton Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 10:21 AM
Thanks Elaine, that has been my experience too, maybe the creative mind works better when the conscious mind is on hold, I appreciate your positive feedback!
Sands Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 6:50 PM
John, this is excellent. I love it! Sometimes, amazing things come to us in the middle of the night! My first poem at soup did lol. Well done :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Thanks Heidi, yeah it has happened to me a few times and I think that they are the most creative songs when they come spontaneously!
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