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Let Me Be Your Rain

Corners of your parchment heart curl a world you once knew unfurls as the love fades away Words written so sensual and smooth dried as petals of a once blooming rose wilting ever slowly as the seasons close Blank eyes stare off into a darkened sky final chapters begin to come apart tainted pages lost from the very start O let me be your rain to be there to comfort you to wash away the pain O let me be your rain to clear up all the grey giving you a sunny day SMILE : )

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Date: 10/4/2016 6:15:00 PM
Oh what a lovely and sweet poem, Tim!
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Date: 10/1/2016 7:51:00 PM
Love this. it's so gentle and sweet, Tim.
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Date: 10/1/2016 6:21:00 PM
Gosh Tim, the visuals in this....the dried paper becoming moist again. Like a rose opening. Just beautiful.
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Date: 10/1/2016 2:34:00 PM
- All roses need sunshine ..... lovely poem, Tim:) - I wish you a gorgeous weekend, enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2016 2:27:00 PM
Very sweet..It makes anyone feeling blue smile...Loved it..Tim.
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Date: 10/1/2016 12:58:00 PM
I'm smiling as well.I love the way your words flow. Question,How would I write List poem? I never wrote one. Do you know? Thank you.
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Date: 10/1/2016 12:01:00 PM
I'm smiling Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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