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Let Me Be Spared

In the hospital,in this bed I awake in disssmay ..... not wanting to face another day As i am awaking i look around but there's not a soul to be found No one has called ...or bothers to see and i realize that no one cares about me I sit alone is there anyone i can phone Only silence keeps near .....the sting of a single tear What did i do What did i say for my life to end up this way ...My mind dosen't understand nothing makes sense over whelming sadness becomes so intense ...I tried so hard to do everything right but no peace of mind seems to be in sight ....I gave love and parts of me my heart my soul,i gave my all ......tell me why all i do is fall ........if i can't have all i have given and shared ....then let me go,let me be spared....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/3/2010 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Helen. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:18:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Helen. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:00:00 AM
Many congratulations on having your poetry featured >> James
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Date: 1/16/2010 1:24:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup. A great start with this excellent write. I hope the hospital scene is just a topic and not your life. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/16/2010 10:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Helen. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2010 6:38:00 PM
Welcome Helen You have penned a sad and lonely poem with intense imagery. The sad person who can't understand why. neatly rhymed well done...Margaret.
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