Let Me Be

"let me be"

just as birds
I will fly
let me be

eagle high
I will soar
let me be

peace within
I am free
let me be

SkyWatcher
02-24-23

endurancefreedomhappinesspeacefree verse

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Aysha Nuwas

February 24, 2023 at 4:19 PM

a lovely poem, enjoying reading.

Lisa Ricci

February 26, 2023 at 2:53 AM

Good Morning Aysha. Hello. Thank you very much. May we all have peace within. Have a wonderful day.

Chris Green

February 24, 2023 at 1:45 PM

Sometimes that is what we need. Peace and quiet, no questions, no duties, no reasons, no requests, just silence. Your poem says a lot in such a small frame. Sounds like it is time to find a nice tree to sit under and watch the day pass...quietly. : ) Well done my friend.

Lisa Ricci

February 24, 2023 at 2:09 PM

Wow. Hello Chris. So nice to see you. Look who logged in (smile). Thank you Chris for visiting my page and entry. Truly. What can I say, I'm all about freedom and the feeling of freedom. (another smile) How in the world are you. Safe and sound I hope. Time truly has passed hasn't it. Thank you Chris for turning to my page. Never have I taken that for granted. Have a wonderful night and weekend too. Peace and More.

Tom Cunningham

February 24, 2023 at 7:52 AM

That's all many of us want Lisa, to be free of any constraints and to enjoy life peacefully. Tom

Lisa Ricci

February 24, 2023 at 8:55 AM

Hi Tom. Hello. So nice to see you. Thank you very much for such a lovely review and commentary. Yes, you are right that all we want is to be free and feel free to have peace. Thank you Tom. Have a wonderful day and weekend. Keep enjoying poetry and poetry soup. Blessings always. (smile)

Daniel Turner

February 24, 2023 at 7:36 AM

I think most people would agree, Lisa. We all just want to be left alone, to live in peace. I love this short impactful poem. Have a super weekend.

Lisa Ricci

February 24, 2023 at 7:43 AM

Hello Daniel. Hi. Its so nice to see you once again. I'm sorry I have not been to your page and entries for such a long time. May this day find you well. Thank you so very much for a wonderful and meaningful review and commentary. I so appreciate beyond words of your thoughts of my entry. The format is my own and it is meant to have power and impact. So that is a big plus for me that you see that. Have a wonderful day and weekend. I look forward to returning to your page very soon. Keep enjoying poetry and poetry soup. And yes, may we all be free and have the feeling of being free. (smile)

Martin Braun

February 24, 2023 at 6:47 AM

Very nice... "fly on, little wing" Jimi Hendrix Little Wing (Olympic Studios, London, UK, October 25, 1967) The Jimi Hendrix Experience

Lisa Ricci

February 24, 2023 at 7:39 AM

PS Martin. I am a big believer in souls and of freedom and the feeling of freedom and will write of this from time to time. I just wanted to explain with the hope that you believe me when I say I do not know of the song and title you mention. Yes, I live under a rock as they say. (smile) Thank you.

Lisa Ricci

February 24, 2023 at 7:07 AM

Hello Martin. Thank you very much for sharing your commentary with me. I live under a rock and have been blinded with life that I do not know of the song or title. I will have to look it up. I give you my word I did not copy anything. This is just what came to my mind earlier this morning and the format is mine too. I do however appreciate and like the one and only Jimi Hendrix. My message to all including myself is my we all fly soar and just be. May we have peace. Thank you once again. Have a wonderful day and weekend. Enjoy poetry and poetry soup as well. (smile)

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