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Let it flow

Verse Contest: Brian Strand Snow covered trees line the road Creating a tunnel Keep going, keep going, capture the beauty before it ends The snow will be gone around a few bends when the jackets are gone Gray, bare trees stand around Take pictures for memories where beauty is found To carry you through those gray, bleak days Keep going, keep going, then take off your coat in warm sunshine, with a smile Freedom rings one way or another, let it flow, each moment, each mile Heidi Sands 12/6/23 Placed 8th in the contest.

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 12/10/2023 12:58:00 PM

Lovely as always, Heidi! Congratulations!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2023 1:50:00 PM

Thank you very much Sandy :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/10/2023 8:48:00 AM

Beautifully done. Love it. Congratulations and God bless you, love, Gina

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2023 1:50:00 PM

Thank you very much Gina. Blessings :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2023 6:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2023 6:12:00 AM

Thank you so very much Sara. I hope you have a nice day :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/6/2023 6:54:00 PM

A wonderful poem my friend. Snow comes and quickly ends. Have a blessed day, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/7/2023 5:10:00 AM

Thank you Jerry :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/6/2023 1:33:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun "let it flow" write. The snow is fun but it goes as fast as it comes. Good Luck. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/6/2023 2:25:00 PM

Hi Paula. Yes, it can go quickly. Although once winter fully sets in here in the mountains, it piles up and stays a while. (this poem about the other day traveling, showed how abruptly the snow can be gone around a corner traveling south, where it hadn't landed) . I hope you are having a wonderful day too. Thank you very much :)

Silent One

Date: 12/6/2023 11:01:00 AM

Excellent verse for the contest Heidi.. imagery and great use of words here..

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/6/2023 11:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Silent One :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/6/2023 10:48:00 AM

Much enjoyed the imagery you brought to fore my friend. I loved the tone and flow of your poem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/6/2023 11:05:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay! I am happy to hear that :)