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Let It Burn

LET IT BURN Let my love light the way through all your darkened journeys. Think of me and the flame will always and forever be there, shining, like Polaris to guide you. Luminous. Let it burn on like a candle in holy refuges, burn on. No disbelieving wind will extinguish this pure love flame. Burn on. Let it burn from year to year, from star to ever-shining star through the eons. Burn on.

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Date: 5/17/2017 3:50:00 PM
Very romantic smooth, Phil. I feel the burn from your hot pen. A potent, plaintive plea of love. Excellent poem. Love always.
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Date: 1/1/2017 5:49:00 PM
How absolutely delightful. I loved this piece...Indeed, burn and blaze...on.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 1/19/2017 12:38:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment. :)
Date: 1/1/2017 2:11:00 PM
I really liked the flow of your line breaks here. It allowed me to read at an accelerating rate, which very much fits message behind the poem.
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Date: 12/31/2016 5:51:00 PM
Nice one Phil! :) Happy New Year.
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