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Let My Beetles Go

LET MY BEETLES GO ! ! And it came to pass That a lone beetle was crying In the wilderness, alas, After many years trying To release all the beetles around From the misery of slaving - Building a great ant-hill mound. (For the ants, a great time-saving ! ) And he warned the ant-king That his beetles must be freed From the bondage of working Because of the ant-king’s greed “Let my beetles go !” he said; But the king hardened his heart, “They’ll work till they’re dead. . . When this mound’s done, another will start.” Then plagues - small, great, some worldbeaters, Were sent - ant footrot, antshell-itis, And infestations of hungry ant-eaters. The king said, “How great your God’s might is !” . . . and he let the beetles go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/24/2012 6:14:00 PM
I really enjoyed this , Sydney. Why the heck don't I hear from you? ARe you super busy?
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:01:00 PM
Very clever poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 6/24/2012 9:56:00 AM
Deb's giggling...guess you will teach them simile and metaphor one way or the other? perhaps a sense of hUMMER? hmmmmmmmm Light & Love Oh Naughty Irreverant One
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Date: 6/22/2012 2:56:00 PM
ha! a funny take on the passover story (i'm assuming that's what you had in mind). i enjoyed this very much!
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:11:00 PM
....is this your "L" poem, Sidney ?..... "L"- for "L"ike it....well written. - Thank you for S-mail. - Have a "L"ovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/22/2012 12:57:00 PM
Interesting words you penned today Mr. Beck. Peace and blessings.
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