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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Waler

Lest We Forget the Horses

Watching old newsreels sadness washes over me 

Highstepping horses, gentle eyes transformed in fear 
valiantly charging under men that could not yield

Amid the noise of cannons, over the death-filled  battle-field ,
sides flecked with foam,  so far from home,  
somehow they know how desperate is this final charge
hoofbeats pounding, hearts bursting, falling in their stride

Now the faded image shows a glory past and gone
Yet we must remember them and how their courage shone
Lest we forget the horses, or the majesty of them
In solemn re-enactment we must remember them
And grant a special place in paradise where they can roam.

Written for the Australian war  horses that went overseas
and never returned 


Some Paradise Where Horses Go Poetry Contest
Michelle Faulkner
Placed 4th.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ormulyce Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 7:03 AM
A beautiful and poignant piece.
Delaney Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 3:44 AM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, These are topics that need addressing and I salute you too for that. SuZ
Kauffman Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 1:22 AM
So sad and so poignant your poem that remembers these brave horses. Congratulations!
Delaney Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 5:54 AM
Thankyou Sam: Enjoy their full history in the link below the photo. Best, SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 10:20 PM
I am so glad to see this gem on the winner's list SuZ. Congratulations on your wonderful win! You know this is a Fave from me from the past. xxoo
Delaney Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 5:48 AM
Hi Connie: I appreciate you remembering this one. I had to amend the original to fit the line limit. Hope all is well in your world, hugs, SuZ
Faulkner Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 6:58 PM
Congratulations on placing in my contest, Suzanne, thank you for entering.
Delaney Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 7:35 PM
Thanks so much, Michelle: Horses are such beautiful animals. Stay safe.
Leblanc Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 8:26 PM
I am an amateur historian and this piece was right up my ally. Truly an exquisite poem. I loved each and every line. Crow
Emu Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 12:42 AM
Wow very moving tribute to these dine animals. Enjoyed it very much Suzanne. Craig.
Laurie Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 6:55 PM
Hello Suzanne... your poem is very moving and wonderfully written. If you get the chance to hear Eric Bogle's song - as if they know - you will hear a connection. I truly enjoyed your poem Suzanne - Lindsay
Delaney Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Hello Lindsay: Thanks so much for you comment today and for reading. I will look up that song and get back to you. In an ever more automated world we need to glorify the beauty of and our connection to horses. SuZ
Hicks Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:28 AM
This appeals to me in two different ways: my love for the movie War Horse, and my always-leaning-towards-pacifism state of mind. You, my friend, know how to draw someone in to read your poetry.... that title is AWESOME!
Delaney Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:37 AM
I loved that movie too. In Australia we still celebrate the history of the war horses. Did you see Gallipoli the movie. Here is a link to the website for the Australian light Brigade. http://www.lighthorse.org.au/
Lindley Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 11:07 PM
I truly love horses and this great write!!! BBBravoooo!!!!!
Delaney Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Robert: It means a lot, SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 9:19 PM
Dear Suz, this poem is so beautifully written. Our world would be so different without the help, strength, loyalty and love horses have provided. Your tribute to them is a beautiful reminder of our debt to these wonderful creatures who have been a blessing in our lives. Another of your poems going into my favorite file. Thank you for honoring them so. #7
Delaney Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 1:57 AM
I have always been a horse lover, Connie: Thanks for reading here and I will definitely share some poems at PoetryForThought soon. Hugs,SuZ
Devonshire Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Dear Suzanne, I'm a great lover of horses and your poem gave me both goose bumps and tears. Horses are usually very gentle creatures who bond with humans easily. It pains me to think of all the horses, as well as all the people, who have lost their lives on the battlefield. Heartbreaking and beautiful write! Best wishes, Carolyn
Delaney Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Dear Carolyn: A late response to your welcome comment. I have been inactive here for a few months but glad of the friends I have made here, Fondly,SuZ
Sirak Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Wonderful. This poem reminds me of the movies War Horse and Hidalgo. In this age of trucks and tanks we forget that man once relied on living breathing animals to carry them.
Delaney Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Hi Monteray: I think we have often fallen down in the advocacy that God charged us with. Hope you are well. SuZ
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May 18, 2014 at 3:08 AM
hello Suzanne, I love horses, and the rides upon, every path they took in history... Let's not forget... Horses are as much part of our past,.... enjoyed..Linda
Delaney Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Hi Linda: Hope all is well. I am back spending time at the Soup. Thanks for your support, Always, SuZ
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