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Lessons Learnt In Life

"Lessons Learnt in Life"
5.  Never trust anyone

She
Saw me
Asked for fee
Oh no, baby
I get it for free
But lust gives new degrees
Oh yes, she was so sexy
She said, "With no hands, it's messy"
That turned me on, so I guess you see
The tempting dilemma it came to be
I told her her river would become sea
She winked, walked away, that's fantasy
No latex held, seduced by three
In the morning, destiny
Now dictates burning pee
Then I had to flee
So urgently
Now agree
Boldly
Gee



I had to try this but please don't think this is true....knock on wood....lol

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Jill Spagnola Date: 11/20/2015 12:19:00 AM Eric, I never anticipated Etheree creating laughter...yet you did it. Awesome life lesson! your piece has a great flow, I love the raw, ethnic background you pen this with...groovy...:), jill Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 10/12/2015 8:37:00 AM Haha, oh that is a big leap of trust, getting jiggy without protection...a big lesson learned. I like your take on the prompt Eric, you did very well with your unfortunate event :) Login to Reply Eric Boddie Date: 10/13/2015 4:20:00 PM it wasn't my unfortunate event....lol....that's just one reason to never trust anyone....lol

Alexis Y. Date: 10/11/2015 3:32:00 PM Hey Eric, I just came back to say Happy Belated Birthday my soup friend. I hope you had a awesome day:-)Alexis Login to Reply Eric Boddie Date: 10/13/2015 4:18:00 PM thank you alexis....;)

Skat A Date: 10/10/2015 11:51:00 AM Eric, Congrats on your wonderful win. **SKAT** Login to Reply Eric Boddie Date: 10/13/2015 4:17:00 PM thanks skat....your input always means a lot to me....;)

Anita Sharma Date: 10/9/2015 4:16:00 PM wow good one ..liked Login to Reply Eric Boddie Date: 10/13/2015 4:16:00 PM thanks anita....you didn't know I am a part time comedian....I just don't get paid for it....lol

Toquyen Harrell Date: 10/8/2015 5:12:00 PM I wouldn't say "never" haha. Happy birthday, my friend :) Login to Reply Eric Boddie Date: 10/13/2015 4:12:00 PM well I do say never....I am a Trojan warrior....lol

Alexis Y. Date: 10/8/2015 9:29:00 AM Eric, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis Login to Reply Eric Boddie Date: 10/13/2015 4:10:00 PM thank you alexis....but the inspiration itself was my biggest win....;)

Constance La France Date: 10/7/2015 11:35:00 AM Eric , not sure how to respond to this but the writing is good and thanks for visiting my poetry ... Login to Reply Eric Boddie Date: 10/13/2015 4:09:00 PM thank you bw....you know you are one of my favs....;)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/6/2015 11:25:00 PM WOW, Eric, you did well with this form. Interesting words by the way. HUGS... LINDA Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/6/2015 5:29:00 PM looks like their was a nasty reaction to this action lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Eric Boddie Date: 10/13/2015 4:01:00 PM and I know people it has happened to more than once....lol

Jaycee Cervenka Date: 10/6/2015 5:29:00 PM LOL... Eric, Don't you know to always wear your life jacket when your playing in dangerous waters. glad this one is not true, but I had to smile. Login to Reply Eric Boddie Date: 10/13/2015 4:00:00 PM of course I know....but so many out there don't....lol