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Lessons Learnt in Life

"Lessons Learnt in Life" 5. Never trust anyone She Saw me Asked for fee Oh no, baby I get it for free But lust gives new degrees Oh yes, she was so sexy She said, "With no hands, it's messy" That turned me on, so I guess you see The tempting dilemma it came to be I told her her river would become sea She winked, walked away, that's fantasy No latex held, seduced by three In the morning, destiny Now dictates burning pee Then I had to flee So urgently Now agree Boldly Gee I had to try this but please don't think this is true....knock on wood....lol

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Date: 11/20/2015 12:19:00 AM
Eric, I never anticipated Etheree creating laughter...yet you did it. Awesome life lesson! your piece has a great flow, I love the raw, ethnic background you pen this with...groovy...:), jill
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Date: 10/12/2015 8:37:00 AM
Haha, oh that is a big leap of trust, getting jiggy without protection...a big lesson learned. I like your take on the prompt Eric, you did very well with your unfortunate event :)
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eric boddie
Date: 10/13/2015 4:20:00 PM
it wasn't my unfortunate event....lol....that's just one reason to never trust anyone....lol
Date: 10/11/2015 3:32:00 PM
Hey Eric, I just came back to say Happy Belated Birthday my soup friend. I hope you had a awesome day:-)Alexis
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eric boddie
Date: 10/13/2015 4:18:00 PM
thank you alexis....;)
Date: 10/10/2015 11:51:00 AM
Eric, Congrats on your wonderful win. **SKAT**
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eric boddie
Date: 10/13/2015 4:17:00 PM
thanks skat....your input always means a lot to me....;)
Date: 10/9/2015 4:16:00 PM
wow good one ..liked
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eric boddie
Date: 10/13/2015 4:16:00 PM
thanks anita....you didn't know I am a part time comedian....I just don't get paid for it....lol
Date: 10/8/2015 7:13:00 PM
congrats on your win Eric..:)
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eric boddie
Date: 10/13/2015 4:15:00 PM
thank you ajitha....poetry is my Life and I appreciate when others appreciate it....;)
Date: 10/8/2015 5:12:00 PM
I wouldn't say "never" haha. Happy birthday, my friend :)
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eric boddie
Date: 10/13/2015 4:12:00 PM
well I do say never....I am a Trojan warrior....lol
Date: 10/8/2015 9:29:00 AM
Eric, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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eric boddie
Date: 10/13/2015 4:10:00 PM
thank you alexis....but the inspiration itself was my biggest win....;)
Date: 10/7/2015 11:35:00 AM
Eric , not sure how to respond to this but the writing is good and thanks for visiting my poetry ...
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eric boddie
Date: 10/13/2015 4:09:00 PM
thank you bw....you know you are one of my favs....;)
Date: 10/6/2015 11:25:00 PM
WOW, Eric, you did well with this form. Interesting words by the way. HUGS... LINDA
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Date: 10/6/2015 5:29:00 PM
looks like their was a nasty reaction to this action lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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eric boddie
Date: 10/13/2015 4:01:00 PM
and I know people it has happened to more than once....lol
Date: 10/6/2015 5:29:00 PM
LOL... Eric, Don't you know to always wear your life jacket when your playing in dangerous waters. glad this one is not true, but I had to smile.
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eric boddie
Date: 10/13/2015 4:00:00 PM
of course I know....but so many out there don't....lol