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Lessons Learned Too Soon

I sat at your table I’m sure, I was 5. The first time I learned About being alive. Helicopter landed in The field, Right out back. No time to finish eating, Rushed out, forced to pack. Stayed with a neighbor I barely knew And then the next day, Said goodbye to you. And when you’re 5, One minute your there, Healthy, alive. And the next your gone, I visit a stone. No one tells you How to be alone Because some lessons You shouldn’t have to learn at 5.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/6/2020 7:49:00 AM
Heartbreaking poem and you are right, such lesson no 5 yr old should have to learn.. Not seen you post in a while, hope you come back soon..
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Date: 4/16/2020 1:51:00 AM
Brings back memories for me also, Love the poetry, really gets through when reading...
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Date: 2/28/2020 9:50:00 PM
Just saw this. Powerfully moving. Great write.
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Date: 2/26/2020 7:46:00 AM
Lessons are learned at every age and stage of our lives. Although, they are hard lessons to learn at a ripe young age. I think the hardest lessons are when we are older and should have known better or aware of. I love this poem. Welcome to the soup, dear Tara :) Hugs Charlie
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Date: 2/8/2020 6:02:00 AM
Great thoughts and they seem to flow spontaneously from your heart! Write more!
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Date: 2/7/2020 9:32:00 AM
Tara, Very nice lesson in your poem my Dear Niece. Happy Re-Birthday. -Richard
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Date: 1/9/2020 3:51:00 PM
This is a sad one. Hugs Rick.
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Tara Dawn
Date: 1/9/2020 4:49:00 PM
I have happier stuff, I promise! It’s the seasonal somberness. Thank you for taking the time to read it!
Date: 1/4/2020 3:42:00 PM
Your poem brought tears to my eyes — so heartbreaking. The lines: "No one tells you / How to be alone" are especially powerful!
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Tara Dawn
Date: 1/9/2020 4:48:00 PM
Thank you for reading it!!

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