Lessons

Shades of gray, hover in the sky Blue is seen as if to imply, Don’t let the gray moods keep you down The bright sun will erase your frown Perspective is a choice to make Something to give yourself or take White clouds look like fingers reaching Learn from great lessons they’re teaching Heidi Sands 12/13/20

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Tony Hargreaves

Date: 12/16/2020 11:00:00 AM

I love this poetic style. Couplets/Tetrameter and in bite size chunks. I look forward to reading more. 'White clouds look like fingers reaching'. Great imagery. Tony

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/16/2020 11:27:00 AM

Thank you very much Tony. I appreciate your kind feedback :)

Peter Dome

Date: 12/14/2020 9:27:00 AM

Love this, just what i needed at the moment. well done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/14/2020 11:05:00 AM

Hi Peter. I am glad to hear that. Thank you :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/13/2020 4:51:00 PM

It's amazing to me how you not only learn but convey such beautiful lessons from the sky, from clouds... from all of Nature. Lovely penned, Heidi! Peace, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/13/2020 5:36:00 PM

Thank you Gershon. I wish peace for you too :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/13/2020 4:16:00 PM

"perspective is a choice to make" - every single moment of each and every day. Bravo Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/13/2020 5:36:00 PM

Thank you Caren. I hope all is well :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/13/2020 3:06:00 PM

Much inspiration in your scenic sky, Heidi---enjoyed the tone of your poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/13/2020 3:10:00 PM

Hi Vijay. Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed it. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/13/2020 12:54:00 PM

Hi Heidi, I enjoy the message in your positive and uplifting write. Thanks for the lesson:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/13/2020 1:50:00 PM

That is great to hear Alexis. Thank you very much and you are welcome. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/13/2020 12:45:00 PM

The message you transmit is a lesson in itself, Heidi. Your words are very positive. ~ Hope you are keeping well. Take care. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/13/2020 1:49:00 PM

Hi Paul. That is great to hear. Thank you! I am ok and I hope you are well too. Have a nice evening :)