Leprechauns

When I was very, very small
I read a poem of great renown.
(Or maybe not so small at all)
I loved that verse and wrote it down.
The rhyme was called the daffodils
And it was Mr. Wordsworth’s, (Will’s).

The picture it left in my mind
Was something that I pondered on.
The only  answer I could find,
He’s speaking of a leprechaun.
I’ve never seen a daffodil
On any North Dakota hill.

I fancied all these little elves,
Dancing and laughing all the day,
Carefree and enjoying themselves,
Not knowing they were watched at play.
They played a game in which they rolled
Their darling little bags of gold

Those dancers William thought were flowers
And wrote about so tenderly
Are leprechauns in twilight hours
Their secret known to only me.
I see them dancing over hills.
Of course they are not daffodils

For Debbie Guzzie's contest  "Fantasy Land"
Won no. 6
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 7/8/2011 6:56:00 PM
A belated congrats to you on this one. Finally going down this list. I remember this one. Cute as a button.
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Date: 5/11/2011 1:47:00 PM
What a lovely idea, Joyce. I love Wordworth's 'Daffodils' (or 'Leprechauns' LOL). Have you ever read Dorothy Wordsworth's Journal? It really is beautiful and Dorothy describes the day they saw the daffodils. My best wishes to you and your brother.
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Date: 5/4/2011 3:03:00 PM
Very nice. Congrats.
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Date: 5/4/2011 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Debbie's contest "Fantasy Land". Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2011 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 5/4/2011 5:42:00 AM
An enchanting piece, Joyce! Blown away by your powerful imagination and the imagery. Best wishes! Mikki
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:58:00 AM
You continue to creatively turn out these lovelies, Joyce. Ayye and we be lovin' these wee lassies and laddies ta be shurrre!! Congratulations Joyce
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:56:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Great work - again! x
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Date: 5/3/2011 9:55:00 PM
charmed by this all the way, joyce... congrats on the fine win!:) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/3/2011 6:25:00 PM
congratulations on your win..cory
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Date: 5/2/2011 6:05:00 PM
What a sweet way to envision the wee folk! Thanks for your lovely entry! Light & Love
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Date: 4/30/2011 8:42:00 AM
Hon, I've been very sick. Too many things all at once. Been reluctant to blog about it, but could use some prayers. Thanks for being so kind to me. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 4/30/2011 1:49:00 AM
Boy did that bring back childhood memories, and it was well penned, thank you it was the first I've read this morning and it made me smile, to have those childhood dreams back, oh well, very good, God bless
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Date: 4/29/2011 7:39:00 PM
Smooth, smooth, smooth. You have a way with words, Joyce. Nice work. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:55:00 PM
Hey, there is a new contest called Fantasy Land. I did not even see it just now!!! wow,this is a great entry then, Joyce. I never heard of this poem by Wordsworth, and you sure explained it well.
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:38:00 PM
Wow! Very creative story, Joyce. I can just see the leprechauns rolling golden coins over the hills, smiling as they fool Wordsworth! You have a winner here! Love, Carolyn
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