Debbie Guzzi Poet Rhyme

Lekker Lovers

I'm a fan of lemons
I suck them till I pucker
lovely yeller lemons
bring sunshine to a sucker.

Lekker lemon lollies
lay lolling on my lips
I lick them 'till my mouth's raw
and then dip them in my sips.

Lemon pies I like a lot
with white meringue sans yolk
and those lekker banana creams
well, my love for them's no joke!

Yes, I'm a lekker lover
of goodies by the score
for I've a mighty pucker
and I really am hardcore!

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Sara Kendrick March 3, 2013 at 1:12 PM Congrats on your lekker win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A March 1, 2013 at 9:45 PM nice win, pd

Debra Squyres March 1, 2013 at 7:22 AM What fun !!! Congrats on your win !!

Audrey Haick February 28, 2013 at 7:24 PM Congratulations on a very fine win, Debbie! Enjoyed!! Love, Annalise

Richard Lamoureux February 28, 2013 at 7:23 PM Well done Debbie. I also love lemons I go through a pitcher a day. Congrats on win.

Joyce Johnson February 28, 2013 at 7:05 PM Really, really cute rhyme on the word lekker. Great fun. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Seren Roberts February 28, 2013 at 2:36 PM Congrats Debbie ....Seren

Connie Gildersleeve February 28, 2013 at 12:28 PM Excellent poem. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Heather Ober February 21, 2013 at 6:56 AM I loved reading this!! This is such a fun spin on Su's contest. I'm hungry now ;)

Debbie Duncan February 20, 2013 at 12:19 PM very cute Debbie,,, have a blessed day ;}

Connie Gildersleeve February 20, 2013 at 7:05 AM Reading this I could imagine sucking on a lemon. My lips did pucker. Very nicely done Debbie. Good luck in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

Cyndi Macmillan February 17, 2013 at 4:04 PM HA! Me likey. Funny, something different! Hey, when you can, take a peek at the blogs. I wrote some bad haiku, which is okay, intentional :) But there are some pictures of some of the ice stuff that I thought you might like. And a picture of my monkey on an ice slide. xox Dee

Jack Ellison February 17, 2013 at 7:42 AM Now you've made me drool on my keyboard, Miss Debbie! I hope you're satisfied! LOL Lemon meringue pie... yummy yum yum! "Lekker lemon lollies lay lolling on my lips" love it... hugs, Jack xox

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2013 at 4:36 AM - Nicely, Debbie !!!! - - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop February 16, 2013 at 10:28 PM I love the way you rhyme..You re definitely a lekker of a rhymer..love it ma and Happy weekend sweetie

Andrea Dietrich February 16, 2013 at 8:54 PM oh dang, DEBS. I was actually thinking of writing one kind of in this way. With cute fun alliteration. Well, I am gonna try to erase the words you wrote from my memory, they were too good and I dont' want to use them when I try this one (if I try it at all!!) Love how you did yours.

Tim Ryerson February 16, 2013 at 4:26 PM No wonder you're such a sour-puss, cher! (ouch!)..Unbelievable alliteration in that second verse and throughout the whole poem...Me likes! - Tim

Robert Heemstra February 16, 2013 at 4:26 PM Nice poem for lemons and everything lemon! I enjoyed the read.