Get Your Premium Membership

Leilani - Heavenly Flower

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Andrea Dietrich.


Image result for image for sad island girl with flower

Image result for image for an island flower

Leilani was a little island child as lovely as the bud that she first saw in spring where it was growing in the wild. She loved to visit it, and then with awe she noted its unfolding day by day. Nobody noticed that Leilani, though, was growing smaller. Little did she weigh! What grew inside her, nobody could know. One day the flower that she loved so much began to wilt. By summer it would die. Leilani grew sick too, for it was such a bad disease she had, her soul would fly to heaven, where sweet girls like Leilani are blossoming for an eternity. *I have always loved the sound of Hawaiian names, so I wanted to show Leilani, which means Heavenly flower or garland. written Aug. 30, 2016 for Casarah Nance's "And In Words She Blooms"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/18/2016 11:14:00 PM
Beautiful, heartbreaking sonnet.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2016 7:36:00 PM
Heartbreaking poem, Andrea, beautifully done congratulations on your win.....
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2016 3:38:00 PM
Back to give you congratulations on your placement Andrea. The picture of that little girl that you have up is so sweet. Cheers ; )
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2016 1:07:00 PM
Oh Andrea, this is a beautiful name you are right, but what a sad story told here...how amazing it means Heavenly flower :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2016 12:40:00 PM
Beautiful but sad my friend:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/6/2016 10:19:00 AM
I was moved by this lovely and wonderful poem my dear friend Andrea. Thank you so much for sharing! A 7++ Good luck and best wishes always! love lots, Leonora (SM for you)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/4/2016 6:06:00 AM
The Arabic type name drew me to this and oh no a heartbreaking poem it is written superbly. The formatting n shape structure was spectacular to me, couldn't copy it ah. The rhyme scheme splendid too wow. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse
Login to Reply
Date: 9/3/2016 8:37:00 PM
A sad yet sweetly tender poem, Andrea. I love the way that the name "Leilani" rolls of the tongue, too ... and there's something strangely moving about that section where the flower is unfolding while poor Leilani is growing smaller. As a side note it's a shame that Hawaiian is a dying language. Very few native speakers remain!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/3/2016 11:01:00 AM
A nice twist on the theme Andrea, sad but effective write.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/2/2016 2:32:00 PM
Damn, I thought you were going with: she grows as small as (or becomes) the flower (fantasy) theme. A sweet and sour sonnet. Was this based on a true story?
Login to Reply
Date: 9/2/2016 11:25:00 AM
The death of a child is tragic, but your lifting her to heaven's eternity is grand. I'll try to catch up soon. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2016 10:26:00 PM
A soulful poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2016 7:36:00 PM
Beautiful but sad poem Andrea, absolutely lovely, I always thought Sonnets had 14 lines, but really I don't know much about them, regardless it is a beautiful poem, good luck in the contest. Hope you didn't mind me mentioned this..........Take care....Vera
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2016 6:47:00 AM
Touching, sweet, and sad. Good luck for the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2016 6:16:00 AM
Oh! This is beautiful, Andrea:) Touching too:)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2016 5:42:00 AM
Innovative ... Beautiful ... Sensitive ...
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2016 4:18:00 AM
My daughter's Hawaiian middle name is Leilani Andrea. This is a lovely poem, but so sad. I am sure it will fair well in the contest. ; ) 7
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2016 4:11:00 AM
Very sad but beautifully captured Andrea - you are right Leilani is a pretty name. All the best in the contest Mark
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2016 2:15:00 AM
As a father of a daughter, I find this to be very touching. Your words are amazing as always Andrea. God bless. Keep writing
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs