Legal Limit .08

Not much, seems like a very small amount To the victims it's immense Decisions regretted

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/11/2013 5:15:00 AM

Wow, very few words packing a big punch. Well done, I hope the message gets through.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2010 11:46:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your well deserved win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Magical Mystical Numbers". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2010 8:29:00 PM

congratulations, Barbara. The title really said it!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/18/2010 7:23:00 PM

Shrot and to the point. congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2010 6:05:00 PM

Congrats BG on your winning poem in Debbie's contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy a great win.. in a great contest.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2010 7:26:00 PM

another great message, way to tell it, Barbara.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 7:28:00 PM

You bet, Barbara. Just a little bit puts me over the limit. Legally drunk at .08. My sympathy goes out to the victims of drunk drivers. I has to be hard to live with yourself after causing an innocent one to die by your carelessness. Very well stated in Kimo form! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 6:44:00 PM

Quite witty yet meaningful