Legacy of a Farm

.    It mars the sage, erect and proud
     Beneath a hood of purple clouds...                                
     A weathered barn shares windswept grounds               
     Where shadows deep wear somber sounds            
                                                                                             
     These old remains of dust and brown                                
     From long ago, now stand alone                                           ###  
     Strong arms would hoist, and fit long beams,                          #######
     Of rough sawn timbers, and window panes                    #######
     A living thing, of weathered wood                           ####
     It leans with age in prairie wind                                /    /
     Now softly gray in prairie clay                                               / /
                                                                                       /    /
     A monument of nail and boards                     
     Once sheltered pride,  the sheep, the hordes                      /  /
     While they would plow and turn the fields                  
     To scatter  seeds      ^   in parchment plains                /
                                 N-l-S
                                    l
To pray for  ////////////////////////////// rain, testing faith                             
To quench /////////////////////////////      the grain, they fell to knees
A harvest  //////////////////////////// __   yielded wheat and corn
In clover too                                   lxxl   a lamb was born                           
A precious                                     """"""crop kept safe and dry
But soon                _________               the seasons passed it by
A  place                   l  X l X   l                for those who worked the soil
The  soul,                l  X l  X  l                 the barn, the shrine of toil
The heart_________l..X.l..X..l________  this pride of home and farm             
       Where now only wind whistles through the eaves, 
       And bats and mice find a place to live
       Abandoned and forsaken, a new age awakened
       While gaunt hills stand silently by
       Day after day under the prairie sky

       This monument remains today, a testament of faith in God 
        No one ever passes by, it sits beneath the praire sky
        And though it slowly fades away, the faith will never die


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/1/2012 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:32:00 PM
CARRIE. CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN..XOXOXOX~PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 5:55:00 PM
An excellent write, Carrie and I like how you created the barn. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:28:00 PM
Wow, this is not only a great shape but also a fantastic write! Congrats, Carrie!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie another complicated one. Great shape and verse xx
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:09:00 PM
Interesting work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/29/2012 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, on your win with this wonderful write and well penned Concrete poem. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/29/2012 12:18:00 PM
Carrie congrats on your win, this should be in a gallery, I remember you did one of the planets, love it..David
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Date: 11/30/2009 10:00:00 PM
Carrie, amazing work and congrats in your placement...Raul
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Carrie. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 10:36:00 AM
Carrie, i just love your entry - Wow - and ((((( applause ))))) many congrats on your win >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 9:08:00 AM
Congrats, Carrie, on your win in Deb's contest.. unique idea and well deserved win.. happy to share the stage with u as an honorable mention.. thankxxx for your congrats to me also... blessings .. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/30/2009 9:02:00 AM
Congrats Carrie - you are such an awesome poetess!!! Thanks for reminding me - wow talk about DUH!!! Appreciate and adore you. Tons of hugs, shar xoxoxo
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Date: 11/29/2009 10:15:00 PM
Dear Carrie, Extremely creative and heartbreaking. A sad - sad truth. Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest. Much love, Lainie
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Date: 11/29/2009 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations to you too, Carrie...A poignant and eloquent masterpiece! I am in awe of your poetry...I have learned a lot from you....Tim
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:03:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Deborah's contest, Carrie! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/3/2009 1:41:00 PM
Yup yup, The total focus of this one is The Barn you just used "negative space" which may have cofused some readers as to whether it was Shape or Concrete. I loved BOTH poems. I like this most. Light & Love honeybun
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:40:00 PM
GAH!!! This poem DID NOT get through to the contest Carrie please resubmit!! HUGS!
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:38:00 PM
ohhhhh loverly! Thank you! Light & Love..
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Date: 6/25/2009 6:04:00 AM
....For it almost takes us back to the birth of this old barn here!!?:):)~I truly love old structures; for sometimes I shall touch their bricks or walls, and remember the precious lives which once toiled amid pride to construct them!!~"Very Lovely Write Carrie"~"My Love & Warmth Always & Forever, To 'You & Your Loves,' Eternally, John!!!"~"Have An Extremely Bright & Beautiful Day!!!":):) Bye Dear Lady ~
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Date: 6/25/2009 5:59:00 AM
Smile, "Good Morning, Precious, Priceless & Beautiful Carrie Richards, & All of 'Your Loves!!!'":):)~First I want to "Thank You," for stopping by and leaving "Your" kind comment!! Its is a true joy whenever I glimpse "Your Wonderful & Gifted Name & Self!!!":):) And, it was good to have someone somewhat be able to relate to certain degrees to parts of my write, "My Dear California Lady!!!":):)~And I truly love this seemingly wistful write of "Yours" here....Cont....
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Date: 6/24/2009 8:46:00 PM
Nice, contemplative feeling..and thank you for your welcomed and appreciated comments. ~Trudy~
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Date: 6/24/2009 10:22:00 AM
Great image, Carrie. Who hasn't seen this relic of someone's fondest days? daver
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Date: 6/23/2009 11:36:00 PM
Great imagery...and raises the question why in the the reader's mind.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/23/2009 6:41:00 PM
Once again you are the artist that paints with words, the past upon the present, defining that which rarely captures a passing eye- another one for the favorites file, Dear Carrie- poet butterfly
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