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Left Over Dream

Brilliant gold, sunlight streaming Creeping leisurely ‘cross my bed Filtering through the blue/white voile Soft lips murmuring- beautiful smile breaking Sleepy eyes flutter - open Blink….hmm...left over delicious dream!

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Joy Wellington

Date: 10/24/2010 5:02:00 AM

had to read again! lovely!

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/24/2010 2:47:00 AM

There you go again girl!!! A few words, an entire book....great, love it!! Hugs, Joy (Jew)

John Freeman

Date: 10/19/2010 5:59:00 PM

"Enjoy!" Smile, Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/19/2010 5:31:00 AM

Thanks for your comments today, Audrey. May you have a wonderful day! Love, carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/18/2010 5:44:00 PM

wonder who's waking. jhl

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/18/2010 1:46:00 PM

If you have dreams like this, I hope you'll keep sharing the "leftovers" with us, Audrey! Really a "delicious dream!" Take care, Diane

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 10/18/2010 11:45:00 AM

great poem! thanks for the kind words regarding "bradley"

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/18/2010 5:04:00 AM

you write beautifully audrey,glad to read you!Celene!

James Fraser

Date: 10/17/2010 1:46:00 PM

Wouldn't it be nice to re-enter a dream, lovely poetry Audrey >> James

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/16/2010 10:14:00 PM

Sometimes I wake up smiling, it makes me feel at peace even for that few seconds. Enjoyed your dreamy write felt great to read Audrey. Hope your weekend is going great. Love Wilma

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/16/2010 7:27:00 PM

Some mornings are like that. Not as many as I would like. You describe a morning scene with crystal clarity. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/16/2010 10:42:00 AM

sounds like a wonderful dream indeed! enjoyed reading this and your title's pretty clever too, Audrey! enjoy your weekend! --nikko :)

De R

Date: 10/16/2010 8:23:00 AM

It really is a bummer when you wake up after such a 'delicious' dream. Sweet write, Audrey. Hugs, Emilia:)

Charles Henderson

Date: 10/15/2010 10:25:00 PM

A very nice picture you painted here girl. Way to go. Charles

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/15/2010 8:36:00 PM

Wow Audrey you make me feel like going to bed to capture the mements in this poem. I'll have to go through a lot of nightmares and the voices in me head before finding this perfect picture. Excellent poem

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2010 11:27:00 AM

Great write that I enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/15/2010 8:42:00 AM

I hate waking up from such bautiful dreams, Audrey. Wish they could last forever. Beautiful use of imagery to make this magical moment memorable. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/15/2010 8:22:00 AM

Ahh....lovely dreams...these are the kind you want to re-capture...but as hard as we try, we can't get them back again. But yummy indeed while we are having them!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2010 7:16:00 AM

what a yummy leftover, Audrey! When I blink, it's always the same old leftover. hahaha. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/15/2010 6:26:00 AM

Very interesting and pleasant dream you have described so well, Andrew