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Left Over Dream

Brilliant gold, sunlight streaming Creeping leisurely ‘cross my bed Filtering through the blue/white voile Soft lips murmuring- beautiful smile breaking Sleepy eyes flutter - open Blink….hmm...left over delicious dream!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/24/2010 5:02:00 AM
had to read again! lovely!
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Date: 10/24/2010 2:47:00 AM
There you go again girl!!! A few words, an entire book....great, love it!! Hugs, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:59:00 PM
"Enjoy!" Smile, Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:31:00 AM
Thanks for your comments today, Audrey. May you have a wonderful day! Love, carolyn
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Date: 10/18/2010 5:44:00 PM
wonder who's waking. jhl
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Date: 10/18/2010 1:46:00 PM
If you have dreams like this, I hope you'll keep sharing the "leftovers" with us, Audrey! Really a "delicious dream!" Take care, Diane
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Date: 10/18/2010 11:45:00 AM
great poem! thanks for the kind words regarding "bradley"
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Date: 10/18/2010 5:04:00 AM
you write beautifully audrey,glad to read you!Celene!
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Date: 10/17/2010 1:46:00 PM
Wouldn't it be nice to re-enter a dream, lovely poetry Audrey >> James
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Date: 10/16/2010 10:14:00 PM
Sometimes I wake up smiling, it makes me feel at peace even for that few seconds. Enjoyed your dreamy write felt great to read Audrey. Hope your weekend is going great. Love Wilma
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Date: 10/16/2010 7:27:00 PM
Some mornings are like that. Not as many as I would like. You describe a morning scene with crystal clarity. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/16/2010 10:42:00 AM
sounds like a wonderful dream indeed! enjoyed reading this and your title's pretty clever too, Audrey! enjoy your weekend! --nikko :)
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Date: 10/16/2010 8:23:00 AM
It really is a bummer when you wake up after such a 'delicious' dream. Sweet write, Audrey. Hugs, Emilia:)
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Date: 10/15/2010 10:25:00 PM
A very nice picture you painted here girl. Way to go. Charles
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:36:00 PM
Wow Audrey you make me feel like going to bed to capture the mements in this poem. I'll have to go through a lot of nightmares and the voices in me head before finding this perfect picture. Excellent poem
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Date: 10/15/2010 11:27:00 AM
Great write that I enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:42:00 AM
I hate waking up from such bautiful dreams, Audrey. Wish they could last forever. Beautiful use of imagery to make this magical moment memorable. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:22:00 AM
Ahh....lovely dreams...these are the kind you want to re-capture...but as hard as we try, we can't get them back again. But yummy indeed while we are having them!!
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Date: 10/15/2010 7:16:00 AM
what a yummy leftover, Audrey! When I blink, it's always the same old leftover. hahaha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/15/2010 6:26:00 AM
Very interesting and pleasant dream you have described so well, Andrew
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