Audrey Haick Poet Light Verse

Left Over Dream

Brilliant gold, sunlight streaming
Creeping leisurely ‘cross my bed
Filtering through the blue/white voile
Soft lips murmuring- beautiful smile breaking
Sleepy eyes flutter - open
Blink….hmm...left over delicious dream!

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Joy Wellington October 24, 2010 at 5:02 AM had to read again! lovely!

Joy Wellington October 24, 2010 at 2:47 AM There you go again girl!!! A few words, an entire book....great, love it!! Hugs, Joy (Jew)

John Freeman October 19, 2010 at 5:59 PM "Enjoy!" Smile, Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire October 19, 2010 at 5:31 AM Thanks for your comments today, Audrey. May you have a wonderful day! Love, carolyn

John Loving Iii October 18, 2010 at 5:44 PM wonder who's waking. jhl

Diane Locksley October 18, 2010 at 1:46 PM If you have dreams like this, I hope you'll keep sharing the "leftovers" with us, Audrey! Really a "delicious dream!" Take care, Diane

Kevin Semeniuk October 18, 2010 at 11:45 AM great poem! thanks for the kind words regarding "bradley"

C.C Bloomsfield October 18, 2010 at 5:04 AM you write beautifully audrey,glad to read you!Celene!

James Fraser October 17, 2010 at 1:46 PM Wouldn't it be nice to re-enter a dream, lovely poetry Audrey >> James

Wilma Neels October 16, 2010 at 10:14 PM Sometimes I wake up smiling, it makes me feel at peace even for that few seconds. Enjoyed your dreamy write felt great to read Audrey. Hope your weekend is going great. Love Wilma

Matthew Anish October 16, 2010 at 7:27 PM Some mornings are like that. Not as many as I would like. You describe a morning scene with crystal clarity. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 16, 2010 at 10:42 AM sounds like a wonderful dream indeed! enjoyed reading this and your title's pretty clever too, Audrey! enjoy your weekend! --nikko :)

De R October 16, 2010 at 8:23 AM It really is a bummer when you wake up after such a 'delicious' dream. Sweet write, Audrey. Hugs, Emilia:)

Charles Henderson October 15, 2010 at 10:25 PM A very nice picture you painted here girl. Way to go. Charles

Sidney Hall Mad Poet October 15, 2010 at 8:36 PM Wow Audrey you make me feel like going to bed to capture the mements in this poem. I'll have to go through a lot of nightmares and the voices in me head before finding this perfect picture. Excellent poem

Sara Kendrick October 15, 2010 at 11:27 AM Great write that I enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire October 15, 2010 at 8:42 AM I hate waking up from such bautiful dreams, Audrey. Wish they could last forever. Beautiful use of imagery to make this magical moment memorable. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards October 15, 2010 at 8:22 AM Ahh....lovely dreams...these are the kind you want to re-capture...but as hard as we try, we can't get them back again. But yummy indeed while we are having them!!

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2010 at 7:16 AM what a yummy leftover, Audrey! When I blink, it's always the same old leftover. hahaha. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta October 15, 2010 at 6:26 AM Very interesting and pleasant dream you have described so well, Andrew