Left On the Table

We love to pretend 
And it's easy to say 
That what others think
Doesn't matter or sway

The opinions we have
Of ourselves and our mark
That we've left when it's over
Our personal ark

But why live a life
For no one to remember
The things that we've done
The moments so tender

Wether good or for bad
The worst and the best
When your time expires
Your eternal rest

Did you give it your all
Will they tell of your name
Was it all on the table
Or just a flickering flame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 7:44 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration William. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 6:02 AM
enjoyed reading today!
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:47 AM
Very creative and full of deeper meanings, enjoyed it, William
Bagnall Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:28 AM
Thats right make the most of everything you've got - nice inspiring poem, well done
A   Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 8:22 PM
nice, i like the whole cards on table deal, interesting write, enjoyed...P.D.
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