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Inconsolable

in an instant you were gone without warning or fanfare you left me to make peace with the loss of you a solo in the night inconsolable in a relentless dance of melancholy AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on March 1, 2019 for contest DANCE OF DEATH sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE

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Date: 3/3/2019 1:12:00 PM
The image of the dance and the abandonment works so well. This hits home hard, Line. G.L. in the contest! :) gw
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Date: 3/3/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely compliment, Gershon.
Date: 3/2/2019 4:23:00 AM
"without warning" "without fanfare" is exactly how death takes everyone. Even when there is warning, there never really is. Great job, my friend!
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Date: 3/2/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. Traumatic experiences for those who stay behind.
Date: 3/1/2019 9:05:00 PM
wow, STRONG poem, so good, Line.
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Date: 3/1/2019 9:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for your most appreciated compliment.
Date: 3/1/2019 8:35:00 PM
An emotional dance...so sad
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 8:51:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.

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