Left Breathless

left b r e a t h l e s s by beautiful balance, essence of dulcet moments rescued me- resplendent radiance of magical resonance; fearing not what lies ahead Taken from the poem: absence of complication Date written: 11.15.19 Date composed: 12.18.19 Arbitrium Divisa 5 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory Barden
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Inman Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 5:53 PM
This is lovely Lu Loo with resounding alliteration within your lines.
Hamilton Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 10:12 AM
I loved your original poem, and this excerpt is perfect Laura, congrats on another win!
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December 18, 2019 at 11:51 AM
Loved this stanza Luloo. I need to go find the original poem because I am sure it is just as beautiful as this tidbit shared for the contest. Best wishes.
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December 19, 2019 at 6:46 AM
aww thank you dear Chris- for making me smile daily. x:-)-luloo
Scars Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 6:46 AM
aww thank you dear Chris- for making me smile daily. x:-)-luloo
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