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Left Breathless

left b r e a t h l e s s by beautiful balance, essence of dulcet moments rescued me- resplendent radiance of magical resonance; fearing not what lies ahead Taken from the poem: absence of complication Date written: 11.15.19 Date composed: 12.18.19 Arbitrium Divisa 5 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory Barden

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Date: 1/17/2020 5:53:00 PM
This is lovely Lu Loo with resounding alliteration within your lines.
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Date: 1/14/2020 10:12:00 AM
I loved your original poem, and this excerpt is perfect Laura, congrats on another win!
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Date: 12/18/2019 11:51:00 AM
Loved this stanza Luloo. I need to go find the original poem because I am sure it is just as beautiful as this tidbit shared for the contest. Best wishes.
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Date: 12/19/2019 6:46:00 AM
aww thank you dear Chris- for making me smile daily. x:-)-luloo
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Date: 12/19/2019 6:46:00 AM
aww thank you dear Chris- for making me smile daily. x:-)-luloo

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