Left Behind

Oh could one crawl back
into the womb, till a brighter
birthday; till the time of
a blissful After-parting – 
but the wailing from our 
failures would shake us
from the boughs of Heaven
down to the bowls of Hell – 
Birth is a saving grace...
a duty to self and offspring...
a duty to peers, nation, and
ultimately world: there is 
no paradise for any...if left
behind a hell for even one....
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Ricci Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Good Morning Joe - It was an honor turning to your page this morning. I very much like the title to which it stayed true to to the theme. I found the voice and tone to be in reflective and poetic fashion. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup.
DiMino Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Hi Lisa; thank you again. Have beautiful weekend. Blessings!
Goff Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Agree with comments below, Joe & your incisive replies, thanks for sharing!
DiMino Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Thank you, James; love your comment. Have a great evening my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 1:29 PM
so deep and profound. VERY nice!! I kind of get it. But yeah, it's so difficult to imagine. and all we have these days is faith. Everything is going so sideways!!
DiMino Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 7:59 PM
Thank you, Andrea; so pleased this one spoke to you. Blessings!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 8:18 AM
I cannot imagine this "Oh could one crawl back into the womb, till a brighter birthday;" But it is fun to try.
DiMino Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Hi Caren; thank you so much -- got to admit, it is quite an image to try and wrap ones mind around. Truth be told, everything we know, see and touch as realty, is our imagined image. God alone did not create all of this. That is the truth of Freewill. God is all -- individual and everything. Personal and impersonal. Up, down, sideways all at the same time. Time, Space, and the unsolved mysteries between, presently beyond human comprehension. Will always be beyond human comprehension. In a nutshell, at our best we will always live be Faith Alone.
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