Frances Schiavina Poet Limerick

Lee

There was a young man named Lee
Who left home without a key
He came back in the dark
His wife fired a shot
Then checked to see who was he

Third Place: Cecilia Hopkins Drewer-Limerick-6/11/17

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Line Gauthier November 14, 2017 at 8:01 PM So funny and cute. We're left in suspense as to her real intention... but we can all read between the lines.

Lin Lane June 12, 2017 at 11:58 AM Lee was lucky and so were you that the judge didn't notice your 3rd and 4th lines didn't rhyme as they should in a limerick. It's a good limerick idea, so maybe you can work on the rhyme if you'd like to make it better.

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2017 at 7:46 PM HA. Poor Lee she did not see was he (in time) congrats in the contest.

Robert Pettit June 7, 2017 at 8:21 PM Shoot first, then ask questions. I hope she missed him.