Lee

There was a young man named Lee Who left home without a key He came back in the dark His wife fired a shot Then checked to see who was he Third Place: Cecilia Hopkins Drewer-Limerick-6/11/17

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/14/2017 8:01:00 PM

So funny and cute. We're left in suspense as to her real intention... but we can all read between the lines.

Lin Lane

Date: 6/12/2017 11:58:00 AM

Lee was lucky and so were you that the judge didn't notice your 3rd and 4th lines didn't rhyme as they should in a limerick. It's a good limerick idea, so maybe you can work on the rhyme if you'd like to make it better.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2017 7:46:00 PM

HA. Poor Lee she did not see was he (in time) congrats in the contest.

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/7/2017 8:21:00 PM

Shoot first, then ask questions. I hope she missed him.