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Leaving London

Leaving London A thousand flickered lights Beat out neon Fantasies animation Jerks its pseudo motion Feet by fifty foot tall On the south river board walk Juke box gangsters one-armed bandit Hang street corners From the eyes red light By cliché shop windows Of a thousand past and spent Christmas glazed nights Fishnet nylons legs Twist on black stiletto And stab their vended sex Peep show neon by night Beckons to the slow glue of gutters And last years rain paint Still shines on Eros Street mirrors of a thousand flashing lights Colour thrown to concrete Looses its ghost Down darkling alley recesses Hide the gaunt faces Of old guitar heroes Unshaven lips stuck To the bottles neck Glints and stagger drunkenness Flash blue corkscrews banshee wail Through the avenue As shoes shuffle around the spilt blood pool Swells hot to cold in crimson Breathing its last For the sake of the 50.00 Now trembling hands Had stashed in a pocket A line of tambourine orange Dances a sect jitterbug Tapping bashing chanting Out their impartial message Ha-re Krishna Ha-re Krishna Krishna Krishna Ha-re Ha-re Shoulders back in the city Eye to eye dares to look at me Chill grip warns every stranger To walk sidelong by The night is rushing its spent conclusion Cold wet kerbstone Trips an indifference to warm held hands I hate this place Pavement meals and chewing on plastic London’s dead walls Of stinking underground passage and traffic Time I think For me to leave Go visit the trees Return to the heart I left in the country

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/7/2008 1:32:00 PM
level in your writngs with so many intricate clues, she enjoy'syour poem's very much.I am over a friends house trying to fix their plumbing on sunday and I have your emailaddress handy.Which I appreciate yougiving it to me. I will be writing soon I have to finsih this project and feed her dogs. I like this forum to use to communicate lol. Thank you for your kind comment's and you always make me feellike a good friend. God bless you Colin and the one's you love. Michael
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Date: 12/7/2008 1:27:00 PM
I missed your poems you didnt write for a couple of days.Weall need some time off. My father asked me if youhad written any poems He has become a fan of yours. The language barrior has not been a problems as I have tried to expalin my version of your works with a dictionary sometimes at hand. But most of the time Im able to keep up with a little help from my friend who majors in EnglishLiterature and teachingEnglish. She to has to research your work sometimes. She thinks you are on a deeper
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Date: 12/7/2008 1:23:00 PM
You can find much beauty in your place of birth. I love Princess Diana she wasa wonderful princess it's sad what happened to this lovely Princess and how she was treated bythe Prince but I guess there are alway's two sides to every story. I love the countryside of London like you mention it must be beautiful the old castles the fox hunts just everything indeginous to the landscape. I know how you feel about polution and mother earthand I know whenyougo into the city you wish it was different
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Date: 12/7/2008 1:18:00 PM
Colin what a graphic depiction. My daughter went to London with her school class . They absolutely loved it .the people were so warm and caring. The sights they saw left lasting impression's she some day wants to go back and visit she made some friend's there they email back and fourth. I have alwys loved the English people. Ofcourse I was a beatles fan and so many other groups in my younger years that were English. I guess in every city can be found the things you write about but Im sure you
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Date: 12/7/2008 9:02:00 AM
I am a country girl as well as my friends below, and some people may call us "country bumpkins" ....but there is nothing better than having trees to see out my window...hills, green grass and blue skies. I hope you find your heart back in the country! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/7/2008 3:58:00 AM
...and THIS is why I live in the sanctity of the Vermont woods. :) a perfect portrayal of city (living?) dwelling. Right down to the always daunting, Ha-re Krishna! A flower, sir? Love, Kristin
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Date: 12/7/2008 3:17:00 AM
Colin - A few years back (20 now) I also knew it was time for me to leave the city and return to the countryside - I didn't realize that the transformation would be as life changing as it was at the time but its all good - God Bless, MJ
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